Pump Me Up (Work Out #2) by Andrew Grey
3 out of 5 stars
Ebook. 119 pages. Published June 9th 2010 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:
Taking advantage of a free pass from work, Maddoc decides to try out a fitness center. After meeting up with a friend, Dan, and making dinner plans, Maddoc meets Ivan, a hunky, silver-haired ex-Marine who gives him a ride home. Soon Maddoc finds himself with a new friend, a workout partner, a protector… and maybe something more, as a simmering attraction comes to life between him and Ivan. After moving too fast in previous relationships that fell apart, Maddoc wants to start slowโwants to make sure it can last. Luckily, Ivan is willing to wait.
Likes:
- Better than the first.
- The mystery with the stalker.
- Maddoc learning he can be brave and strong.
- Ivan willing to wait.
- Maddoc’s reaction to being harassed and stalked was realistic.
- Short.
Dislikes:
- The mystery turned out to have an unsatisfying and under explained ending.
- The relationship moved really fast.
- Lots of things about Maddoc’s life were left out or sprinkled in too late into the story.
- Ivan’s sudden decision to nickname Maddoc ‘Tiger’ out of nowhere.
- Lonnie came across as a real asshole.
- Clucky writing and long sentences.
- I don’t see what made Maddoc so appealing he had multiple men after him.
- Maddoc just put up with being stalked and harassed without doing anything to stop it.
While I did like this story better than the first, it still didn’t capture my attention. A lot of my complaints about the first book apply to this one as well โ from the clunky writing to the lack of dimension in the characters. I spent about the first half of the book assuming Maddoc had just moved to town because there was no mention of him having friends or a support system of any kind. It’s only until later that mentions of him living in his house for seven years and being friendly with the old lady next door came up.
The momentum driving this story really comes from the mystery of the stalker. The first thing we learn about Maddoc is that someone’s been leaving him creepy notes and dead flowers. I like that Ivan teaches Maddoc how to defend himself, and that it’s simple and realistic. No fancy joint locks or anything. Just hit the guy and run away. What I didn’t like was that Maddoc didn’t actively do anything to try to stop the harassment or find out the culprit. That was all left up to Ivan.
As for Ivan, I liked him well enough, but considering that he also had some point of view chapters, he didn’t make nearly as strong of an impression as Maddoc. Maybe because there was nothing really going on in his life other than his romance with Maddoc. I do think him taking Maddoc to meet his mom after only having known the guy a few days was crazy fast, even for a romance novella.
Again, I wish the novella had spent less time in the gym and more time developing the characters. Maddoc and Ivan were more developed than Gene and Dan from the last book, but work still needed to be done.
My biggest complaint has to be about the way the stalker plot was wrapped up. The eight word explanation given for why the guy did it was completely unsatisfactory. Why now? Why send flowers like a creep instead of talking to Maddoc like a normal person? Why and how was he stalking Maddoc? Considering the lengths the stalker had to go to, it seemed much bigger than the half-sentence explanation.
As this book is better than the last, I’m hoping that by the end of the series, I’ll actually like the stories. Considering that this series is from back when Andrew Gray started writing, which I didn’t know when I picked it up, it’s not too surprising that the writing needs polish.
