Review: Whipped Cream (Work Out #8) by Andrew Grey

So glad this series is over.

3.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 100 pages. Published June 26th 2013 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Former model Brent Phillips now works the other side of the camera. He makes his money on senior portraits but wants to create an art exhibition. His only problems are lack of a central image and a three-week deadline.

Enter Brentโ€™s friends, who resolve to discover the perfect model for his project. They find him in Tristan Greer, a college student who left home after coming out and is trying to make ends meet.

Though initially reluctant, Tristan agrees to work with Brent to capture the image Brent wantsโ€”a gay version of Herb Alpertโ€™s Whipped Cream album photo. It turns out the camera loves Tristan, and the photographer may as well. 

Likes:

  • Only one gym scene.
  • Brent’s hangup was unusual but reasonable.
  • The plot.

Dislikes:

  • The cover, while it works with the story, is different from the rest of the series.
  • There is no real buildup of the romance.
  • Brent’s issues with his appearance aren’t really dealt with.
  • Only Brent’s issues with his photography project are dealt with, while none of Tristan’s are.
  • No preparation before sex.

This is probably my favorite of the whole series. I’m not sure if it’s because Gray’s writing style changed, though it was definitely better in this book, or because this story only had one quick scene set at the gym. Either way, I’m glad I stuck with the series until the end.

Like the rest of the books in the series, this one followed the formula of the main character having a hangup about getting into a relationship with someone interested in them. Brent’s hangup came as a bit of a surprise, more because it wasn’t hinted at in the blurb than anything else. But I thought it went well with the story, and it didn’t annoy me the way some of the past character’s hangups did.

The plot in this story was what pushed it above the others in the series. There was a goal, something I could cheer Brent on for as he worked to accomplish it. The cover gives me a good idea of the sort of picture he came up with, even though the photoshop job isn’t great. It works with the story, but not with the theme of the rest of the series. I honestly think this book could have been written as a standalone novella, but seeing Dan and Gene one last time was nice.

I think this novella could have been stretched out to a full length book. The guys got together in the blink of an eye, without a lot of buildup or romance. And while Tristan makes it clear at the end that he’s happy being with Brent for now, there were still a lot of things left unresolved. Tristan’s living situation didn’t get any better, and the demands on his time didn’t get any less. The story had a happy ending for Brent, while Tristan felt more like he was a prize Brent got to take home than anything else.

My biggest complaint has to do with the lack of prep before penetrative sex. No matter what book or what author, if there’s no prep, not even a single quick sentence about it, I notice. Because prep = care for your partner, and without that care, my opinion of the relationship goes down.

Review: Work Out Series by Andrew Gray

Work Out Series by Andrew Gray

Series rating: 3 out of 5 stars

Books in order:                                   Books in order of my favorite:

Spot Me                                              Whipped Cream

Pump Me Up                                       Crunch Time

Core Training                                      Positive Resistance

Crunch Time                                       Core Training

Positive Resistance                             Pump Me Up

Personal Training                                Spot Me

Cardio Conditioning                           Cardio Conditioning

Whipped Cream                                  Personal Training

Likes:

  • Short
  • Lots of older characters.
  • Characters with disabilities/diseases weren’t treated badly by others in the books.
  • Some nice character arcs.

Dislikes:

  • Lonnie.
  • Long sentences and clunky writing.
  • Too much attention to unimportant things.
  • Formulaic.
  • I ended up skimming a lot, especially the sex scenes.
  • Some really whiney characters.
  • Not all the stories were suited to the novella format.
  • Forgettable.

I would not recommend this series. As a whole, it’s unimpressive, though it kept my attention enough to finish all the books. As standalone books, Whipped Cream, Crunch Time, and Positive Resistance aren’t bad, but I’d definitely suggest skipping Personal Training and Cardio Conditioning.

The biggest problem with the series is probably how formulaic it is. The main character always has some sort of massive insecurity while the love interest pursues them anyway. Eventually the main character realizes that the love interest is serious and there’s a happy ending. It’s that way in Every. Single. Book.

My second big pet peeve was the gym. Which, I know, is weird because the series is called Work Out so there’s obviously a theme. And it would have been fine but for two things. 1.) A lot of page space got spent showing the characters working out, which didn’t add to the plot and was boring for me. 2.) Because of the gym culture, too much attention was paid to the way characters looked, which made a lot of the romance feel superficial.

It’s not a huge surprise that my favorite books are the ones with less gym time. Not only does time spent away from the gym allow the plot to develop, but it also keeps Lonnie at arms distance. I liked Lonnie in maybe two books, because he does have some good characteristics. It’s his constant gay jokes and wise-cracks, even though they aren’t mean-spirited, that made me hate him. I have no idea why he’s in almost all of the books, other than being Dan’s friend and workout partner.

Dan and Gene were the main characters of the first book and show up in, I think, all of the rest of the series. It sets them apart from everyone else, some of whom I don’t remember seeing at all after their books. It’s too bad I didn’t really connect with Dan and Gene, but I did like the part they played in the last book, Whipped Cream.

When I started reading this series, I had no idea the first book was published back in 2009, a full decade ago. It wouldn’t have stopped me from reading the series, but I wouldn’t have been so surprised at the clunky writing. According to Goodreads, Andrew Gray had only been publishing for about a year when this series began, so he was just starting his writing career. All the books of his that I’ve read before were newer releases, and it’s obvious that his skill and style have vastly improved.

As a whole, this series is forgettable. I had to go and reread my earlier reviews of the individual books to refresh my memory of who the characters were and what happened. I don’t have the world’s best memory, but I should have at least been able to remember back a couple of weeks. Unfortunately, a lot of the characters and plots just didn’t grab my attention or interest enough to earn them a place in my long term memory.

If this wasn’t a series of novellas, I wouldn’t have finished. The shortness was great for the books I didn’t like. Others had problems because they were so short and could have used the page space to really flesh out the characters and the story. I honestly never connected with any of the characters because everything was so superficial. It meant that I ended up skimming almost all of the sex scenes because nothing important was happening. And I love my smut. It’s really sad that, by the time most of the sex scenes came around, I just wanted to finish the book and be done with it.