Review: The Faller by Daniel de Lorne

Depressing af.

2.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 1st edition. 46 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Being caught with another man sends Charlie Young fleeing his family to the forests of southwestern Australia to scrape together steamer-passage to the big smoke of London. But life as a timber faller isn’t easy and itโ€™s made worse when the men he works with are brash, bigoted, and often brutal. All except Jack Tapper, whoโ€™s the kind of gentle giant that sets Charlieโ€™s heart racing.

While the other men head into town for Christmas, itโ€™s just Charlie and Jack and acres of forest. But trees tell no tales and a few days alone is the perfect opportunity to indulge a bourgeoning passion. When the men return and find things not as they once were, Charlie and Jack have to make the hard decisions about whether to stay where they are or run for their lives.

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Likes:

  • A historical setting I’ve never read about before.
  • Felt realistic.
  • Well written.

Dislikes:

  • Some jargon I had to look up.
  • Lacks a romance vibe.
  • Depressing.
  • Romance went from zero to a hundred in a flash.
  • Charlie never once fought back.
  • Open ending.
  • So much angst and grit.

If this story wasn’t part of the anthology, I wouldn’t have read it. I could tell from the blurb that it was going to be depressing. I was right. Not just about what Charlie’s life was like as a gay man in 1912, but everything. The tinned food and oozing blisters the flies that “buzzed around his mouth and nose” as he worked.

I expected the depressing part, but not the angst and grit. My own fault. Honestly, what else should I expect? Two gay men living in a time and place where gay men aren’t just shunned but have to fear for their lives. And living around other drunk lumberjacks with easy access to axes? That’s a recipe for trouble.

I’m not familiar with either lumberjacks or railroads, so I had to look up what a railway sleeper was. It was a little strange that the thing Charlie and Jack were making wasn’t described. How hard would it have been to say it was a rectangular block of wood used beneath the metal railway lines?

The romance itself wasn’t bad. Charlie and Jack had a definite connection. But the story really never gave off a romance vibe. It was more about two men who were struggling to find a way to live happily as themselves. The romance was how they accomplished that goal.

Their romance went from zero to a hundred in an instant. It was a little anticlimactic, to be honest. They went from work friends to kissing and blowjobs within a few pages. It worked within the story, but the sudden change lacked an emotional impact.

The ending was also unsatisfying. It’s so open ended. Did Jack and Charlie make it out okay? Did they find a way to live happy lives?

The best thing I can say about this story is that it’s different. It’s about a time, place, and profession I know nothing about. The writing is solid and the elements of the story feel realistic. Despite that, I didn’t like it. I’m going to say that this type of story just isn’t for me.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Season to Shimmer by Kim Katil

Too much going on without enough payoff.

2.75 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 52 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

One morning close to the holidays, Nolan wakes up to two surprises: a distress call from his younger brother and a beautiful man in his bed. Nolan, an art gallery owner, has always been discreet about his sexuality, but when his baby brother plans to come out at the annual family gala, Nolan wants to have his backโ€”and that means showing up with a man of his own on his arm. Nolan knows just the man for the job.

Skylar, who owns a karate studio in St. Augustine, canโ€™t get his one-night stand out of his mind. When he runs into Nolan at his gallery he is more than happy to volunteer his services as arm candy. Out-and-proud himself with his striking blue/green hair, Skylar is all in. Their adventure means a fancy salon, family drama, lots of sex, a ninja hippo, and palm trees lit up in a very suggestive way. By the end of it, what started as a hookup might become much more. 

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Likes:

  • Nolan and Skylar are great characters.
  • Multiple sex scenes.
  • The support given to Den.
  • The romantic plot.
  • Funny moments.

Dislikes:

  • There’s too much going on.
  • There are too many characters.
  • The romance takes a back seat.
  • The characters aren’t described well.
  • Lack of contractions during dialogue.
  • Long blocks of dialogue without knowing who’s talking.
  • Dialogue without much action.
  • Unsatisfying ending with Nolan’s parents.
  • No payoff with the pictures and website.
  • Spa scene added nothing to the story.

Despite the bad rating, I did enjoy this story. It’s got a good premise, but the premise isn’t suited to a short story. You could get an entire romance series out of this one story.

If I hadn’t read the blurb right before I started reading this story, I would have been lost. There’s way too much going on. So many little side stories and extra characters, at one point I actually said out loud, “Who the hell is Cordelia?”

It wasn’t just that there were a lot of characters. Most were introduced in one big lump and weren’t described at all. Jazz and Julia were practically interchangeable, and their constant taking pictures for some sort of website had no payoff and added nothing to the romance. Dem, for all that I loved how the main cast was super supportive of his coming out, is a mystery to me. I have no idea how old he is, other than that he’s a teen.

This story needed to be cut down and the focus put back on the romance. That would give page space to describe the important characters, flesh them out more, and add more action between the dialogue. Because Nolan and Skylar are great characters with a great connection. They deserve to be the main focus.

The multiple sec scenes are hot. I loved that Nolan straight up asked Skylar to make their relationship more serious. But the ending was too much too fast. It felt almost like a proposal and there just wasn’t enough romance in this romance story to make that feel real.

I will definitely give Kim Katilย another shot. This story had potential, and the funny bit about the palm trees was great. Hopefully the next story of hers will be more appropriate to its length.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: That Turtle Story by C. S. Poe

Overall a good story.

5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 1st edition. 41 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Nor Oโ€™Brien spends his days in sunny Key West caring for and rehabilitating sea turtles. He doesnโ€™t need anything else in life, expect maybe a significant other to cuddle with after a long day. But recent heartbreak has left Nor salty, and heโ€™s not in the mood for anything, Christmas included.

Then Eugene Montgomery walks into Turtle R&R, claiming to have found a clutch of eggs in distress. Nor is smitten with the tourist at first sight, and at the suggestion of his screwball colleagues, indulges in some no-strings-attached fun. Nor and Eugene are quick to get along, happily enjoy each otherโ€™s company, and take in the islandโ€™s unique holiday pleasures together.

But Nor would never leave his turtles, not for any man. So when his rebound fling turns into strong romantic feelings for Eugene, itโ€™ll take a Christmas miracle to keep the two together forever in Key West. 

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Likes:

  • The characters.
  • Turtles.
  • Key West.
  • Christmas miracle.
  • Cute and fun and just the right amount of sexy.
  • The ‘relationship hurdle’ was reasonable but easily overcome.

Dislikes:

  • Nor’s attachment to his ex.
  • Lack of communication between Nor and Eugene.
  • Lots of screwball characters.

This story had a little bit of all the things a good romance should have. Instant chemistry between the men. Something holding Nor back from going all in on the romance. Fun, witty banter with a slight hint of awkwardness. Smut scene. Happy ending.

I like just about any character who has found their calling caring for animals. I’m not the world’s biggest turtle fan, but this story had me invested in the clutch of eggs Nor and Eugene saved. What a unique way to start a relationship.

The instant attraction between the men was a given, since it is a short story. But it felt realistic. Nor wanted to finally put his ex in the past and what better way to do that than have fun with a hunky vacationer. The fact that Nor fell hard for Eugene was also a given. Eugene is great. The guys have good chemistry together, both in bed and out.

I’m usually not a fan of miscommunication in stories, and this time it was more like lack of communication that led to the drama. But that too felt natural, especially when both men actually talked with each other and explained what they had been thinking.

There were a lot of screwball characters in the story, which was odd. It seemed like everyone Nor worked with was a little off. Nor himself was a little strange in his attachment to his ex, a guy who wasn’t that great.

Overall, this was a great story. My complaints are relatively minor and didn’t distract from the story as a whole. The Christmas miracle ending was just the right amount of cute and sappy.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: The Night Sky Festival by S.A. Stovall

Left me feeling hopeful.

3.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 1st Edition. 24 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Photographer Zach is happy to pack up his gear and head to the Mojave Desert over the holidays. Ever since his ex-husband filed for divorce a day before Christmas, itโ€™s safe to say this isnโ€™t Zachโ€™s favorite time of year.

Fortunately, he stumbles upon a town where the residents seem to agree. The good people of Baker would much rather celebrate the possibility of extraterrestrials as they dance under the stars in their unique โ€œNight Sky Festival.โ€ The locals are interesting, to say the least, and they want Zach to join them.

But is Zach ready to let go of his holiday bitterness? And if so, whose invitation should he accept: the cute cashier, the burly single dad, or the sexy fun-loving cop?ย 

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Likes:

  • Good theme.
  • Left me feeling hopeful.
  • The beauty of nature.

Dislikes:

  • Super short.
  • Characters not fleshed out.

I can remember a college creative writing class where we were taught that short stories should have a theme. This story definitely has a theme, but unlike most in this anthology, I wouldn’t say the theme is romance. There’s definitely some romance, but the transformation that Zach goes through has less to do with romance than with moving forward.

Zach’s divorce clearly weighs on him, but he spends so much time not thinking about it that he doesn’t realize how much it’s holding him back. It’s the happenstance meetings in the small desert town that, each in their own way, help him open himself up to romance again. And in the process, finally let go of his bitterness.

The story overall left me feeling hopeful. Getting hung up on something in the past happens to everyone, and it takes some people more time to get over it and move on. And because it was Zach’s failed romance that was the problem, it only made sense for the possibility of a new romance to get him going again.

Of course, given how short the story is, there’s not much to the romance or the characters. The author gets props for capturing Zach’s journey in such few pages. But the shortness left everything very open ended.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Holidays Are Where Your Heart Is by Bru Baker

No smut, but great characters.

5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 1st edition. 42 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Jaredโ€™s been all over the world as a traveling manny with Holiday Helpers, and the itch to put down roots is starting to eclipse his wanderlustโ€”especially since his current family is a handful.

After culinary school, Wes did some wandering of his own, exploring Central America before settling as a resort chef in his motherโ€™s homeland of Costa Rica, a place he loves and where he plans to stay. If heโ€™s learned one thing, itโ€™s to be wary of flings with vacationers. Still, he canโ€™t stand to watch two little Swiss kids lose their belief in Saint Nicholas, so heโ€™ll lend a hand to the manny assisting the family. It wonโ€™t be easy to recreate a traditional European Christmas in a tropical paradise.

Between a snowball fight on a sunny beach and sledding down an active volcano, Jared and Wes discover some renewed holiday magic of their own. Can they make it last a lifetime?

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Likes:

  • Great characters.
  • Interesting setup.
  • The kids didn’t overwhelm the story.
  • Sweet romance.
  • Perfect length.

Dislikes:

  • No smut.
  • Wes’s physical appearance wasn’t well established.
  • We didn’t get to see Wes’s and Jared’s first meeting.

I’ve read books by Bru Baker before and honestly they weren’t as good as this story. Holidays Are Where Your Heart Is is definitely one of the best stories I’ve read in this anthology so far. I have no big complaints about it.

There’s enough information at the beginning to really make Jared a well-rounded character. He’s relatable and fun to read about. So are the kids. I’m always a little wary of kids in romance. They can be annoying, poorly written, or take over the plot. Lia and Lucas were present just enough to help push the plot along and provide lots of reasons for Jared and Wes to be together.

This story didn’t contain any on-page smut, but the tender moments between the men more than made up for it. I was a little disappointed at first that the reader doesn’t get to see Jared and Wes’s first meeting. That also prevented Wes from being physically described in detail. None of those points took away from the story in the end.

The length of this story was perfect. Long enough to round out the characters and have a really nice ending. There have been a lot of stories in this anthology that make me wonder how the characters have gotten to where they are in their lives. This story gave both Wes and Jared enough backstory to answer all the immediate questions.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Trapped in the Valley of the Kings by Blue Jones

Likable characters and an engaging story.

5 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st Edition. 24 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Rival archaeologists Will and Jude slept together a year ago, on the night of the Summer Solstice at a dig in Stonehenge. But they were both wearing masks, so Jude has no idea it was Will he slept with, and Willโ€™s been harboring a powerful, one-sided crush ever since.

Now theyโ€™re in Egypt, competing to find the lost tomb of Queen Nefertiti. Jude falls through a crack in the cave floor, and when Will reluctantly climbs down to help him, they find themselves in Nefertitiโ€™s tomb, surrounded by archaeological treasuresโ€”where they must spend Christmas stranded by a sandstorm.

Will a few sultry hours stripped almost bare from the heat and sharing a bottle of whiskey sort out who should get credit for the discoveryโ€”and the real reason for the tension between them?

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Likes:

  • Likeable characters.
  • Engaging story.
  • Egyptian archaeology.
  • Good setup.
  • Complete story in such a short page length.

Dislikes:

  • White people digging up tombs.
  • Will never confessed that the person he’s been pining for is Jude.
  • Very coincidental setup.

I was a little hesitant at the beginning of this short just because of how short it is. Not everyone can make good characters, a good story, and romance work in only 24 pages. But I was pleasantly surprised how complete this story is. There’s even a quick sex scene. Even with how ‘coincidental’ the setup is, this story was well worth the five stars.

I loved the Egyptian setting, especially the buried tomb. It was incredibly atmospheric without taking over the story. Of course, I did have to tisk at more white people digging up tombs in foreign countries. There’s a lot of regrettable history and bad blood about foreigners coming in and “discovering” things. But I let that pass. There was no time in the story to get into any of that, and it would have soured the mood.

I loved that Will and Jude had a history. It made the story move so much faster. There was no need for character introductions when Will had been pining for Jude for over a year. I just wish Will had actually told Jude he was the one. Even though they’re clearly together by the end of the story, I wanted that little nugget in there.

Blue Jones is definitely an author worth reading more from if she can make a short story this satisfying. It was a fun, quick read and I honestly wish more of the stories in this anthology had left me feeling so satisfied.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.