4 out of 5 stars
E-book. Kindle Unlimited. 2nd, Expanded Editio., 306 pages. Published April 7th 2018 (first published July 28th 2014)

Blurb:
Lord Jasen of Grumhul, an impoverished young nobleman, has come to the Draelands to find a rich husband to help pay his father’s debts. To the shock of everyone, he ends up attracting the attention of King Rilvor himself, and the dragons who control the magic in the land. Becoming royalty wasnโt something Jasen either expected or wanted, but he canโt control his growing feelings for kind and handsome king. Scheming factions at Court conspire to keep him from Rilvorโs side, and now Jasen has to decide if the chance at true love with Rilvor is worth the burden of being the husband of a king.
This sweet and funny Cinderfella romance is complete at ~85000 words and ends in a solid HEA. After all, true love always wins in fairy tales!
Likes:
- Hooked fast.
- Liked Jasen and Rilvor.
- Rilvor’s kids.
- Low angst.
- Risyda.
- No homophobia.
- The daily intrigue.
- World building.
Dislikes:
- Dragons didn’t get much page time.
- Jasen and Rilvor didn’t spend much time together.
- Jasen complains a lot for someone who has it good.
- Kept waiting for something to go wrong.
- Jasen’s being dragon called wasn’t addressed for a long time.
- The romance felt like a distant second.
Note: I read the expanded version of this story, which is a full novel. I did not read the novella, and can’t compare the two.
Every once in a while I’ll come across a book that’s fun while I’m reading, but that, when I look back on it, has major flaws. This is one of those books.
I was hooked fast. I liked Jasen a lot because he’s not naรฏve. He knows that he’s essentially being taken to market and sold to a husband. But he’s not angry or bitter about it. He’s realistic about what’s going on, but also determined to make the best of it. Like how, when his father’s carriage gets stuck in a rut, Jasen gets out and helps the servants get it unstuck. It means getting muddy, but that’s the only way they’re going to move.
I know the blurb describes the book as a Cinderfella story, but I didn’t get that vibe. Sure, King Rilvor is also looking for a spouse, but there’s not a lot of similarities between Consorting with Dragons and the typical Cinderella story. Which is a good thing, in my mind.
Sure, Jasen is a country bumpkin compared to the other men and women at the castle. But I never felt too bad for him because of it. For all that Jasen complains about being behind the curve on things like manners and etiquette, everything always works out for him. When I got to around the 50% mark, I kept expecting something terrible to happen to him, but he skates through everything relatively unscathed.
Rilvor was charming, both as a king and as Jasen’s love interest. I liked that he was older, and that he wasn’t supposed to have been king. I wish he had gotten point of view sections as well. He’s got a rich backstory that could have been expanded upon. And his four children were a surprisingly nice addition to the story.
Unfortunately, Rilvor and Jasen didn’t spend a lot of time together. Their meetings were sparse and short. That did make each meeting more impactful, but when I looked back at the story as a whole, it meant that there wasn’t a ton of romance. I’m the kind of person who likes romance to be more about the dozens of little moments rather than a few big ones. And those sweet, intimate moments were lacking.
The story mostly revolved around the social lives and daily intrigue of Jasen and the other marriage candidates. They were all sequestered in the castle for a final round of social polishing before being put up on the marriage market. This allowed Jasen to make up for being so poorly educated, but it also took up the majority of the page space. I was impressed with the world building, but I wanted more time spent on the romance.
Risyda gets a shout out for being awesome. I was excited that she was interested in women, and got a little hint of romance. I also love that there was no homophobia at all in the book.
My final complaint is about the dragons. They existed mostly in the background. Which was definitely a disappointment, since a big reason I picked up the book in the first place was because it had dragons. I also thought it was strange that Jasen’s being dragon-called wasn’t brought up for a long time.
In the end, I’m glad I picked up this book. I enjoyed reading it. It just wasn’t what I hoped for.



