4 out of 5 stars
E-book. Kindle Edition. 128 pages. Published July 29th 2019

Blurb:
Grimbold Drake, influential patriarch of the Drake family, revels in his solitary life of orderโa life which is thrown into chaos when his son pays him an unexpected visit, bringing with him a broken but gorgeous young man more than a millennium Grimboldโs junior. A man Grimbold instantly finds himself yearning to fix, to protect, and to claim.
Meek, subservient, and eager to please, Wally Brand doesnโt doubt the tales heโs been told of the cruel and deceitful Amethyst clan, so when heโs forcibly taken from his home and entrusted to Grimbold Drakeโthe most powerful Amethyst dragon of allโhe knows he wonโt be long for this world. Only thereโs a gleam in Grimboldโs eyes when he looks Wallyโs way and a tenderness to his touch that Wally canโt understand.
All he knows is one thing: whether Grimbold means him harm or not, if he can be good to his dragon captor, maybe, just maybe, heโll get out of this mess alive.
Swallow is a 30,000 word steamy omegaverse mpreg-ish romance set following the events of the Forbidden Desires series. It contains a broken young man who badly needs love, a curmudgeonly dragon with a heart of gold, new nicknames, familiar faces, and the sweetest dog known to dragonkind. For maximum enjoyment, Swallow is best read as a companion piece to the Forbidden Desires series.
Likes:
- Short but complete.
- Grimbold did his best to help Wally with his issues.
- Wally and Grimbold, together and separately.
- Grimbold didn’t force Wally to do anything.
- How even dragons like Grimbold can see the harm that’s been done to Disgraces.
Dislikes:
- How traumatized Wally is.
- Wally’s name.
- Wally’s scars aren’t brought up much.
I was honestly surprised that Grimbold got a story. He’s been in the background of all the books, this powerful, looming figure. He didn’t seem like the type to take in an omega, especially considering how big the age difference would be. Grimbold is over a thousand years old and Wally is twenty-two. Talk about an age difference.
Still, Grimbold’s age did give him advantages. He’s willing to take Wally in and is able to quickly ascertain ways to help keep Wally from freaking out too badly. Normally, I’d say that Wally needs extensive therapy, but that doesn’t seem like a thing dragons do, nor would they turn to human therapists.
Wally is traumatized, both from his experiences and from what he’s been told about the Amethyst clan. My heart went out to him. He was initially so focused on just surviving, constantly expecting to be hurt.
I’m not sure how I feel about the lack of attention on Wally’s past trauma. On the one hand, the book didn’t really focus on it, making it feel very ‘out of sight, out of mind’. Even though Everard commented that Wally had extensive scaring, it wasn’t brought up again. On the other hand, delving into it might have done more damage to Wally’s fragile psyche. It would also have lengthened the story and given it a darker overall tone.
As it is, the story is sweet and cute. Watching Wally relax and realize that he’s somewhere safe with someone who cares for him was heartwarming. In the same way, watching Grimbold’s tender care was cute.
There wasn’t as much going on in this book aside from the romance, which makes sense considering its short length. I’m not complaining about the lack of subplot. Wally and Grimbold got plenty of characterization while giving their romance time to grow. I liked that Grimbold didn’t initially plan to be with Wally physically, and when he realized his growing feelings, he made sure they were returned and took it slow.
One of the upsides of having Grimbold be a main character is that we got to see him realize how badly dragon society has been treating omegas and Disgraces. Not only with what happened to Wally, but with the mother of his own children. In a way, taking care of Wally allowed Grimbold to atone for past mistakes.
Even the meaning behind Wally’s name is just another example of how poorly dragons treat Disgraces. Luckily, all of Grimbold’s children seem to be on board with the recent societal changes. Even if Everard said he wouldn’t call Wally ‘dad’. That made me laugh.
Overall, I think this was a good addition to the Forbidden Desires series. Even though this novella clearly had a different theme than the first three books, it’s nice to see how quickly society can change. Even if the dragons are only changing for selfish reasons.
Be sure to check out the other books in the series – Clutch (Forbidden Desires #1), Bond (Forbidden Desires #2), Mate (Forbidden Desires #3)







