Review: Thor (Misfit Shifters #2) by Cheyenne Meadows

This book was different, in some good and some bad ways.

3.5 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 100 pages. Published June 22nd 2019 by JMS Books LLC

Blurb:

Thor, the winged lion guardian of the Bluebird Valley Preserve, is dying, and too weak now to sustain his powerful magic which protects the land and inhabitants from harm. There’s only one way to save himself and that’s by sacrificing Zach. 

When a gut feeling lures Zach back to the preserve, he answers it. Despite his tragic breakup with Thor a decade earlier, he knows he must step in to help the man save the preserve, even as Thor does his best to deflect him at every turn. But Zach can out stubborn a mule. 

As a winged horse, Zach is more than just a pretty face. His special abilities pale, however, compared to what happens when he and Thor come together. What Thor doesn’t count on are new and old enemies forcing his hand — and Zach’s persistence, not just in saving him and the Preserve, but in stealing his heart, as well.
 

Likes:

  • We get Thor’s story.
  • More mythical creatures being introduced.
  • Explanation for how the preserve keeps humans away.
  • Zach’s determination to fight for love and for Thor’s safety.
  • The lynx, Lavender.
  • Zach’s unique tastes in home dรฉcor.

Dislikes:

  • Thor’s attitudes.
  • The introduction of gods made the story feel a little wonky.
  • The extra bit of faux drama at the end, when it was obvious nothing bad was going to happen.
  • The side plot and the romantic plot were basically one and the same, and the story lost momentum when the romance angle was finally sorted out.
  • Zach’s lack of response when he found out why Thor pushed him away.

I was really glad to see that Thor was one of the main characters of this book. He’d piqued my interest in the last book, since he was the first non-normal animal shifter we got introduced to. It should have been a dead giveaway that there would be more mythical shifters to come when a unicorn and centaur were also seen living at the preserve.

I liked that Zach’s shifted form was a winged horse, and even though it was weird, his parentage was also interesting. However, I wasn’t sure how I felt having random gods show up in the story. Even after finishing the book, I’m still not sure how I feel about it. It’s not the gods themselves that bother me, but rather I feel like the world should somehow be different if there are going to be minor and not-so-minor gods popping up randomly. The fact that most of the residents of the preserve seemed to have no idea that gods existed makes the whole gods angle feel like it was tossed in without much thought to how it impacted everything else.

Zach was definitely my favorite character in the book. He’s funny, especially with how he decorates Thor’s cave. But it’s his determination to save Thor, despite being pushed away without explanation a decade earlier, that really won me over. Thor on the other hand did a lot that annoyed me. The first being that he didn’t talk to Zach about why he refused to continue their relationship. Thor just made unilateral decisions for both of them. And when Zach realized the reason behind Thor’s attitude, there was almost no reaction. I would have at least liked to see a talk between them about how open and honest communication is a must.

There was a little bit of extra, and in my opinion unnecessary, drama near the end of the book. It happened suddenly and felt like someone had decided the book needed one last spurt of excitement. To me, it was obvious that nothing bad was going to happen, and I’m a little annoyed that it took the intervention of outsiders to get Thor to realize he and Zach should be together.

Overall, I had fun reading the book. The last few chapters felt a little slow, since without the push and pull over the romance, there wasn’t much of interest happening. I can’t help but wonder if there will be even more mythical creatures and gods appearing in later books, or if things will return to more ‘normal’ animal shifters. Either way, I’m looking forward to reading the next book in the series.


Be sure to check out Mitch, the first book in the series.

Review: Mitch (Misfit Shifters #1) by Cheyenne Meadows

A fun start to a series. Love the concept of the preserve.

4 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. Published March 23rd 2019 by JMS Books LLC

Blurb:

Running into a winged lion shifter was never in Mitch’s plans. But Bluebird Valley Preserve has more surprises in store, including wildlife and shifters, most of whom Mitch never knew existed. As a caracal shifter, Mitch is used to oddities. The chaos, he can handle. Calix, the saber-toothed cat, is what knocks him off balance. 

Calix is a vet and a physician. Great in theory … except he can only diagnose, not heal. Still grieving, he vows to protect his heart from another crushing blow. Then, he saves a caracal shifter from the flood waters. When he sees Mitch, he struggles with leaving the past behind and making a future for himself which includes Mitch. 

Raging waters and mudslides threaten, leaving the whole preserve at risk. Mitch puts his life on the line to rescue Calix. But, it’s Calix’s heart Mitch finds the most challenging and worthwhile to win. 

Likes:

  • So many types of shifters.
  • Mitch.
  • The plot.
  • That everyone at Bluebird Valley Preserve is a little weird.
  • Great side characters.

Dislikes:

  • No idea how long the book is. No indication on Goodreads or Amazon.
  • The slow burn felt very slow.
  • The momentum died off near the end.
  • Lots of things left shrouded in mystery or glossed over.

I’ve read shifter stories by Cheyenne Meadows before, specifically her Shifter Hardball series. They had their problems, but I didn’t hesitate to pick this book up, and I’m glad I did. Despite the slow start, loss of momentum, and smut crammed in at the end, it was a good read.

Mitch has never been to the Bluebird Valley Preserve before, and the reader gets to explore it as Mitch does. I loved the variety of shifter species, from squirrel and chipmunk to elephant and moose. There were even a unicorn and a centaur, two creatures that I’ve never seen in relation to shifter books before.

And with the variety of shifters came some great side characters. Especially Cain and Kitt. Best of all for a series, there’s plenty of characters who seem to be perfectly set up to have stories of their own. Looking at you, Nate.

I really liked Mitch. He was relatable โ€“ just a guy looking for a place where he could be himself without everyone worrying that he would blow something up. I wish there had been more description of what his caracal form looked like because I wasn’t familiar with those. As for Calix, I liked him fine. He didn’t really leave much of an impression, other than as a man choosing to be alone because of past emotional trauma.

My lack of opinion of Calix was not helped by the fact that he didn’t show up until chapter 7, 27% into the book. Even then, Calix and Mitch didn’t start to develop real, non-lust based feelings for each other, let alone act on them, until chapter 16, 68% into the book. Then there are reasons why they can’t be physical, which quickly became annoying.

Things really slowed down for the last eight chapters because Mitch gets injured and is forced to be idle. It allowed the romance to bloom, but it wasn’t the most interesting part of the book.

I wish more info on the preserve and shifters in general had been provided. I’m hoping more will be in future books, but I’m a nerd for world building. Mitch’s unusual abilities are glossed over, as is who funds the camp and a lot of things about the camp. It’s not too noticeable when reading, but looking back, I have a lot of questions.

My biggest question is how long the book is. There’s no page count on Amazon or Goodreads. It felt like a full length book, but maybe that’s because the ending got slow.

I’ll definitely pick up the other books in the series. So far, I like this book better than the Shifter Hardball series. It seems as though Meadow’s style is getting better, which is nice.


Be sure to check out Thor, the second book in the series.

Review: Hex and Candy (Strange Bedfellows #1) by Ashlyn Kane

Good characters and an interesting plot.

4 out of 5 stars

Ebook. Dreamspun Beyond #26. 214 pages. Published August 21st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

True loveโ€™s kiss can break the curse. But then what?

Cole Alpin runs a small-town candy store. He visits his grandmother twice a week. And sometimes he breaks curses.

Leo Ericsonโ€™s curse is obvious right away, spiderwebbing across his very nice body. Though something about it worries Cole, he agrees to helpโ€”with little idea of what heโ€™s getting into.

Leo is a serial monogamist, but his vampire ex has taken dating off the table with his nasty spell, and Leo needs Coleโ€™s companionship as much as his help. When the hex proves to be only the beginning of his problems, Leo seeks refuge at Coleโ€™s place. Too bad magic prevents him from finding refuge in Coleโ€™s arms.

Coleโ€™s never had a boyfriend, so how can he recognize true love? And thereโ€™s still the matter of the one responsible for their troubles in the first placeโ€ฆ.

Likes:

  • Good characters.
  • The plot caught and kept my interest.
  • How Cole loves his family while still being different from them.
  • Cute and fluffy.
  • Hint of suspense and mystery.

Dislikes:

  • Some things weren’t explained/fleshed out as well as I would have liked.
  • Abrupt ending.
  • It felt like the penalty for being a douche either wasn’t very steep or didn’t exist at all.
  • Lack of setting. I had no idea the book was set in Canada until 20%.

This book caught my attention from the moment I read the blurb. Breaking Leo’s curse and falling in love along the way was definitely fun to read about. Cole was my favorite character of the two but I liked Leo as well.

I am a sucker for characters who are different from their family or who don’t have traditional abilities. So Cole was definitely the kind of character I like to read about. And Leo was a great character to follow as he learned about the obscure world and all it contains. Though I am a little disappointed that he wasn’t more interested in learning about it at first.

There were a few times when I wondered if this book was maybe the second or third in a series. I just got the feeling like I was supposed to already know some things, and because of that they weren’t explained very well. It wasn’t anything too big, but I am a fan of world building, and I had questions. Beyond that, I had no real grasp of the setting. Things like how big the town was or where everything was in relation to each other would have been nice to know. There were a number of times when the story surprised me because it turned out that what I was imagining was completely different from what the author had in mind, but the description didn’t happen until later.

There were a lot of times when Leo or Cole would interact with a side character and their relationship wasn’t clear or I had no idea what the character looked like. I would have liked to see Leo and Amy actually become friends. That seemed a little rushed, especially given how important their friendship was.

For an author I’ve never read before, I am happy with this book. None of the problems were big enough to keep me from enjoying the story, and I’ll definitely read the rest of the series when it comes out.

2020 Blog Changes

The short version:

  • I’ll be reviewing a wider range of gay romance books. Specifically fantasy and science fiction.
  • The name on the blog will change. It’s still me, I’ve just rearranged my pen names.
  • The blog’s web address will change from maylacer.home.blog to LoveIsLoveReviews.com

The long version:

I began this review blog as my 2019 New Year’s resolution. It was the second time I’d tried to start a review blog. The first time, I didnโ€™t go about it the right way. Without a consistent posting schedule, I ended up only posting a handful of reviews.

I learned from my mistakes, and did my best over 2019 to post regularly. I didn’t always succeed, but I’m proud that I kept with the blog for the entire year. I’m looking forward to making the blog even better in 2020. Which means some slight changes.

First, a new domain name. Gone is wordpress.com/maylacer.home.blog. Up now is LoveIsLoveReviews.com. The layout of the site will also change, but the overall content won’t. I’ll still be posting two reviews a week, on Wednesdays and Fridays.

The final change is in the pen name. When I began thinking of writing gay fiction, I knew I wanted multiple pen names. I had this idea, that on hindsight was completely unrealistic, that I would separate my writings and reviews into three categories โ€“ contemporary, fantasy/science fiction, and BDSM. That way it would be was for readers to go straight to what they wanted.

There is still a part of me that thinks it’s a good idea. But that part is small. The rest of me has come to the realization that I am not the overachiever I was back in college. Back then, I had no life. I went to class, worked, and slept. I didn’t party, my social life was limited, and I lived with the fear of student loans over my head. Oh, and I was miserable.

I don’t want to go back to the days of feeling trapped by my obligations. Writing and reading are fun for me, and while I would ultimately like to monetize my blog and make a career out of my writing, I never want to lose my passion.

I currently have two pen names for gay romance. I use May Lacer for my short erotica stories, and want to keep that name for that alone. June Jadus is my first pen name, the one that has deep meaning for me, and the one I ultimately want associated with the many books I will one day finish writing.

 I also want June Jadus to be associated with my reviews. So from now on, that’s who is in charge of the blog. It’s nothing but a name change. The person behind the keyboard is still me, no matter the name. May Lacer will get her own, smaller blog, where the focus is on the erotic short stories. That blog will come soon.

Finally, I’d like to thank all of the people who have been following this blog and liking the posts. Knowing that there are people out there who are aware of my blog has given me the confidence I need to keep going for the next year. Thank you all so much, and I hope you enjoy the reviews to come.

Happy 2020!

Review: Scorpio: The Heart To Help (Boys of the Zodiac #8) by Jamie Craig

A slow burn with instant chemistry.

3.5 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 182 pages. Published October 30th 2010 by Amber Quill Press, LLC.

Blurb:

From the moment Colin Braugher meets millionaire Grady James, he has the other manโ€™s numberโ€”spoiled, obnoxious, and worst of all, fake. Every word out of Gradyโ€™s mouth is cheesy and insincere to Colinโ€™s ears, which is just as well, since Colin has reason to dislike the other man before he even arrives in Chicago. After years of being ignored by James Foundation, Grady is arriving to take over the small Heart to Help charity where Colin volunteers. Colin sees nothing but unwanted changes and self-aggrandizement in his beloved charityโ€™s future.

For his part, Grady wants only the best for his grandmotherโ€™s favorite charity. Confused by his cold reception, alone in a strange city, and fascinated by a man who seems to want nothing to do with him, Grady is at loose ends. Until Colin gives an inch, and Grady knows he can have so much more than that if Colin would only see the man he truly is…

Likes:

  • Lots of sex scenes that move the romance forward.
  • Grady isn’t a typical rich brat.
  • Grady felt very human.
  • Charities that deal with non attention grabbing illnesses.
  • Little bit of drama at the end.
  • Colin and Gwen’s friendship.

Dislikes:

  • Colin, in the beginning.
  • The initial attraction between the men.
  • Colin’s beard.
  • The lack of epilogue about the charity’s fundraiser.

This book is a slow burn on the romance but quick with the sex. Since I enjoy a well-crafted sex scene, I didn’t mind. Especially since all the sex scenes furthered the romance.

It’s the physical chemistry that initially draw the men together. Colin hates Grady before they even meet. I was expecting some sort of big reason for the intense hatred, but it’s basically because 1.) Grady’s dad is a rich asshole and Colin expects Grady to be the same way and 2.) Colin is worried that his best friend will get pushed out of her job now that Grady has shown up to work with the charity.

The second part of that worry is valid. I enjoyed Colin and Gwen’s friendship and it was clear that Gwen was great at her job. But the other part of Colin’s hatred for Grady felt both childish and moronic. Colin expected Grady to be this horrible monster, yet didn’t have any evidence to back it up. He even mentioned seeing a tabloid about Grady being gay, yet there was no mention of Grady getting into any of the kinds of trouble tabloids love to report about. Luckily, Colin grew on me. I would have liked to see him mature a little more by the end, but I was happy with the HFN ending.

Grady was the character I connected to right from the start. Yeah, he was rich, but he was very human. He loved the charity because it was his grandmother’s passion. He was lonely after moving to Chicago because he didn’t have friends there.

Aside from the physical attraction, I’m not sure why Grady continued to pursue Colin when it was clear that Colin hated his guts. Because of how friendless Grady was in Chicago, it felt a little like Colin latched onto the first cute gay guy he ran across. And as for cute, this is just a personal preference thing, but Colin’s beard bugged me. It’s been a while since I was in college, but I don’t remember a lot of guys having beards.

The little bit of drama at the end was nice. It gave Colin a chance to prove that he saw Grady for who he really was. I do wish the story about the charity’s fundraiser/play had been addressed. I assume it went on without a hitch, but I don’t know.

I’m glad I went ahead and read this book even though it’s technically part of a series. The books all seem completely unrelated to each other, and this is the one that caught my eye. Not sure if I’ll read the others, especially since the authors are different. But coming from an imprint I’ve never heard of before, this book was well written and well edited.

Review: Gingerbread Palace (Delectable #4) by E.M. Lynley

I learned my lesson from the last book and gave up at chapter 3.

1.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 130 pages.Published December 11th 2013 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

A week before Christmas, Alex Bancroftโ€™s bakery goes up in flames. When he runs back inside after a dog, firefighter Kevin Flint has to rescue Alexโ€”and Quincyโ€”from the smoldering building, endangering them and inflaming Kevinโ€™s resentment.

Now Alex canโ€™t create the elaborate gingerbread house he donates to a foster-kids charity each year. Fire Station 7 again comes to his rescue, offering their kitchen and their manpower.

Everyone but Kevin Flint, that is. A third-generation firefighter, heโ€™s fearful of stepping too far out of the closet. So when his powerful physical attraction for Alex ends in a sizzling secret encounter in the firehouse, Kevin canโ€™t push Alex far enough away, and Alex returns the cold shoulder.

After a change of heart, Kevin risks his life to prove heโ€™s worthy of Alexโ€™s affection, but without a Christmas miracle, their chances at sweet romance might go up in smoke.

Like all Delectable stories, Gingerbread Palace includes recipes used in the book.

Likes:

  • Both men seem like interesting individuals.
  • How the firefighters offered to let Alex use their bakery.
  • The detailed explanation of how firefighters do their work.

Dislikes:

  • Alex and Kevin have no chemistry.
  • Alex didn’t need to run into the building.
  • The beginning lacks impact.
  • Alex’s responses to Kevin.

DNF at chapter 3.

I learned my lesson from the last book. When the sex scene happened and I wasn’t invested, I quit. Lynley’s writing style just doesn’t work for me.

Both Alex and Kevin were interesting characters with deep issues that affected their outlook on romance. Sadly, both men came off as assholes more than a few times. Alex knew Kevin was deeply closeted. Alex also knew he didn’t want to get involved with someone closeted. He then warns his employee about not outing Kevin, before apparently forgetting all that and taunting Kevin about being closeted, then sleeping with him.

I could have overlooked that if the men had any chemistry at all. They didn’t. They had lust, which is not the same.

Even their lust didn’t work for me. They acted like teenagers who literally couldn’t control themselves. There’s a line about Kevin’s body taking control. It was a major turn off for me, because the men didn’t like each other at all.

Like the last book, Alex and Kevin felt like they were being pushed hard by the author to get together. It was clunky, and in the race to the romance, what was forgotten was the chance for the reader to get to know and like the men. Preferably before they start acting like assholes to each other.

Alex running back into the building was stupid and unnecessary. The firefighters were there and the fire was mostly out. For Alex to rush in himself felt like nothing but a plot device. Maybe there is an explanation for his actions later in the book. This author does seem to like to hold back information. But that leaves me thinking Alex is an idiot, which is never a good first impression.

Speaking of first impressions, the beginning was underwheling. The story starts from Kevin’s point of view, and progresses without much tension or personal investment on his part. I appreciated the detail of how firefighters do their job, but I think Alex should have started the story, since it was his bakery that was on fire

With this flop, I’m officially giving up on the Delectable series. Many other people seemed to like the books, but a lot of the reviews are from six years ago. I’m going to assume the writing style is the problem for me, but it could be that the quality of gay romance has gone up significantly since 2013.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Brand New Flavor andย An Intoxicating Crush.

Review: An Intoxicating Crush (Delectable #3) by E.M. Lynley

Forced myself to finish it. Wish I’d DNE-ed it.

1.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. First edition. 234 pages. Published July 10th 2013 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Simon Ford’s success is hard-won. He grew up in Napa and resents the rich people who have moved into the valley, changing the culture by opening boutique wineries and pricing the locals out of the market.

Austin Kelvin runs an award-winning winery his father started after making a fortune on Wall Street. He lives the posh lifestyle Simon resents but secretly longs to attain. However, Austin’s world isn’t as luxurious and privileged as it seems: he didnโ€™t inherit his fatherโ€™s business savvy, and his winery is going under.

When Simonโ€™s boss sends him to covertly scope out Kelvin Cellars for a possible takeover bid, Simon sees it as a step toward attaining his financial dreams. Until he falls hard for Austin. The feeling is mutual, but when Austin learns the real reason for Simon’s initial interest, he suspects Simonโ€™s seduction is merely a means to procure the winery at a bargain price. If thereโ€™s any hope of winning Austinโ€™s heart, Simon will have to risk it all to prove Austin is more than just an intoxicating crush.


Like all Delectable novels, this book includes the recipes used in the story.

Likes:

  • I was curious enough about the Austin/dad/winery/money situation to finish the book.
  • It got better at the end.
  • It was easy to skim.
  • Austin’s not a bad character.

Dislikes:

  • The box set is missing a book.
  • Simon is unlikeable.
  • I felt like I was being pushed to think of Simon and Austin as a couple instead of it happening naturally.
  • Never got into the relationship.
  • Lots of inconsistencies in the beginning.
  • Austin’s reason for not going to his dad for financial help is stupid.
  • Too much wine, winery, and business talk.
  • Too much sex.
  • Reason for the men’s problem is clichรฉ.
  • Ending was abrupt.

I feel like when a book gives off a bad first impression, it’s easier for the reader to see its faults. This is one of those books. I did finish it, after skimming about nine chapters, because there was one and only one thing I was curious about. And it ended up being dumb. I donโ€™t think this book was worth finishing.

The books opens with Austin worrying about his winery’s financial state. No explanation of why the winery was doing poorly was given, which made me wonder if Austin was an incompetent businessman. Eventually, the blame is shifted elsewhere, and I warmed up to Austin, who really is a hard worker.

It was the obvious hesitation Austin had about asking his wealthy father for money that ultimately made me finish the book. I was expecting some big reveal and a lot of drama, especially considering the reveal about Simon’s mom. But no. Austin didn’t ask because he has principles, aka too much pride to admit he failed.

Simon struck a bad cord with me right from the start. He’s literally the guy who wears a suit to work when everyone else, including his boss, is in business casual. He’s a former public school kid who wants to be rich. But he had a job driving a limo and saw firsthand how rich people could be assholes. So now he hates rich people, assuming they’re all the same.

With Simon, his assumptions about Austin are the biggest turn off. He knows next to nothing about Austin except that his dad made a lot of money on Wall Street. It’s one thing to dislike rich people because of how they use their money to buy influence and price out the locals. It’s another thing to assume that everyone who went to private school is a rich snob.

I could still probably have gotten into the romance if I didn’t feel like I was being pushed into it. With most romance books, the couple’s attraction feels natural. Not this time. It was heavy-handed and very noticeable. So much so that, combined with Simon’s attitude and personality, it turned me off of the romance.

I ended up skimming more than half of the book. Especially the sex scenes. I usually enjoy sex scenes, but there were too many this time. The same thing goes for the wine and business talk. It ended up being boring and tedious.

The beginning also has other problems. Lots of inconsistencies, from the color of Simon’s eyes – once described as gray and then again compared to lapis lazuli, which is a deep blue – to Austin and Penny being worried about money one minute and then suggesting sending an annoying employee on an all-expense paid weekend trip the next.

Things did get better near the end. I stopped skimming around chapter eleven, which was when the tension began to mount. The reason for the breakup, which is heavily hinted at in the blurb, was clichรฉ but I actually thought it was handled well. As was Simon’s plan to get Austin back. Unfortunately, the ending was abrupt, coming right after the men reconciled.

My final complaint is about the way the first few books are bundled. It leaves out books 2! What the hell? I mean, the books are all about different couples, but still. I didnโ€™t even notice one was missing until I got onto Goodreads.

I’m worried about the next book. It it’s a dud, I’m not going to finish it, and I’ll drop the series.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Brand New Flavor, and Gingerbread Palace.

Review: Brand New Flavor (Delectable #1) by E.M. Lynley

An interesting novella. Could have been better, but a decent introduction to a series about food.

3.5 out of 5 stars

 Ebook. 105 pages. Published November 21st 2012 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

When artisan ice cream maker Jericho Brown first meets food writer Cameron Clay at a charity tasting event, they get along like strawberries and chocolate sauce. Jay’s unique flavors thrill more than Cameron’s jaded palate, but after a delicious encounter in Jayโ€™s delivery truck, where extra-creamy frozen treats are not the only delights sampled, Cameron loses Jayโ€™s contact infoโ€”and any hope of a real date.

Desperate, Cameron convinces his editor to host an artisanal ice cream contest in hopes of drawing out the elusive genius. But more complications threaten to intervene. Will Jay even enter the contest? Or will the chance of a happily ever after melt away? 

Likes:

  • Interesting plot.
  • Short.
  • Hot sex scenes.
  • Versatile couple.
  • The distance Cam went to find Jay.
  • Ice cream.

Dislikes:

  • Lack of physical description at the start.
  • Most of the women were either annoying or mean.
  • Eric is a sociopath.
  • I don’t understand why Eric and Cam repeatedly tried to get their relationship to work.
  • Cam and Jay spent most of the story apart.

I enjoyed the plot of this story. As a fan of desserts of all kinds, a story about an artisanal ice cream maker and a food critic caught my attention right away. Jay and Cam are both interesting guys, and I was rooting for them. Especially since so many people and events conspired to keep them apart.

The novella’s short length meant that the story started off like a shot. The first sex scene happened within a few pages, and while it was hot, the sex happened way too early in the story. Cam had barely been introduced and Jay didn’t even get a physical description before they were naked. And unfortunately, their time together was mostly spent in carnal pursuits, both in that scene and in the story overall. This is especially noticeable since the men spend the bulk of the story apart.

The lengths Cam went through to find Jay again made the story interesting. As were the brief point of view moments from Eric as he tried to mess everything up. I thought the ice cream contest was a great idea. But in terms of typical ‘getting to know you’ romance, this story was lacking.

In a way, Eric played the most important role since he was the one who kept Cam and Jay apart. Eric was great as a bad guy, but his actions as a regular person didn’t really make sense. The one question I kept asking myself was why Eric was so hung up on Cam. For that matter, why did Cam try to make his relationship with Eric keep working? They obviously weren’t a good fit, neither was in love, and both could easily find other guys. So why was Eric so hung up on Cam that he had to wreck everything between Cam and Jay?

Eric’s part in the story wasn’t even wrapped up well. After he finished messing with Jay, he completely disappeared. Even when Cam realized what Eric had done, we didn’t get to see him actually do anything about it. It was a little disappointing.

The women in the story, with the exception of Elaine, were also disappointing. Maya and Kimmy were dumb, giggly stereotypes and Dorothea was a vindictive bitch. In a story with few characters, they stood out in a bad way.

In the end, this story’s short page length saved it. A longer book couldn’t have pulled off keeping the romantic leads apart for all but the first and last chapters. The smut was hot, but I wanted something more from the romance. At least the men were versatile. And I chuckled when one of the characters snapped his phone shut. That was a dead giveaway about the story’s age. Luckily, the rest of it aged well, and I’m looking forward to the next book in the series.


Be sure to check out the reviews for An Intoxicating Crush and Gingerbread Palace.

Review: In Other Wordsโ€ฆMurder (Holmes and Moriarity #4) by Josh Lanyon

While the mystery was weak, I was happy to see the domestic bliss between Kit and J.X.

4 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 215 pages. Published July 13th 2018 by Josh Lanyon

Blurb:

Death reveals all secrets.

Mystery author Christopher Holmes, now comfortably married to sometimes rival, sometimes nemesis J.X. Moriarity, is starting a new career as a true crime writer when threatening anonymous notes start arriving.

Even worse, Christopher’s ex also arrivesโ€”asking for help locating the man he left Christopher for!

It’s lifeโ€”and deathโ€”as usual at Chez Holmes. In other wordsโ€ฆ Murder. 

Likes:

  • Domestic bliss.
  • Kit has changed noticeably for the better.
  • The drama that happens all at once.
  • The good things I’ve come to expect from the series.
  • Kit’s going to write again.

Dislikes:

  • David.
  • The synopsis is misleading.
  • A lot of elements seemed completely piecemeal.
  • The mystery was weak.
  • The ebook ended at 86%

I still love Kit and J.X. Everything about their relationship and personalities that I’ve liked in the previous books is still there. Only better now, because they’ve finally settled into a rhythm of domestic bliss.

There were some really touching moments in the book, as well as examples of how Kit has changed for the better. He’s willing and able to compromise without making a scene first. Will he ever be best friends with Kit’s family, especially his nephew? Probably not. But they can tolerate each other now, which is progress.

However, a point of note. Kit and J.X. are not married yet, despite what the blurb says. Neither is Kit about to start writing true crime novels. He is, however, possibly going to start writing more cozy mysteries again, and that makes me excited for him.

In terms of things going on in this book, there was a lot. Kit’s stalker from the last books shows up, there are creepy clowns, his ex-husband David, a lawsuit, a dead body, a kidnapping, and a deadly game of hide and seek in a field of corn. It made for an entertaining read, but when I finished, I realized how piecemeal everything was.

The mystery itself was weak. This was the first time Kit didn’t find the body himself, which made things feel a little distant. And honestly, the other, non-murder related things easily drew my attention away. Attack clowns? Yeah, that’s where my focus was, in part because it was so strange, but also because it was the most immediate problem.

David also took up a lot of the attention. It was interesting to see him for the first time. He was more sleazy than I expected. But his lack of concern for people, both Kit and Dicky, really showed how callus he is. J.X. is a million times better.

I’m not mad at what mystery there was, but the sleuthing definitely felt like it was on the back burner. The climax of the book was both tense and funny. Only Kit would end up hiding in a field of corn that his would-be murderer then tries to mow down with a tractor.

My last complaint is that the ebook ended at the 86% mark. That’s way too short. It completely caught me off guard. But it lends credence to the idea that the original mystery plot wasn’t enough to carry the book, so other things, like Jerry and the clowns, had to be added to pad the run-time.

Even though the mystery was underwhelming, I still liked this book for the romance between Kit and J.X. I’m looking forward to the next book, which I hope will have a wedding in it.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Somebody Killed His Editor,ย All She Wrote, andย The Boy With the Painful Tattoo.

Review: The Boy With the Painful Tattoo (Holmes and Moriarity #3) by Josh Lanyon

Everything about this book was great, from the mystery to the relationship.

5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 228 pages. Published October 5th 2014 by Just Joshin

Blurb:

It’s moving day at Chez Holmes. Somehow, against Kit’s better instincts, he and J.X. are setting up house together. But while J.X. is off at a writing conference, Kit unpacks a crate that should contain either old books or new china. It doesn’t. Within the mounds of green Styrofoam popcorn is a dead body. A very dead body.

There goes the neighborhood.

Likes:

  • The relationship between Kit and J.X.
  • The fears that still creep up on Kit.
  • Kit dealing with how he feels about sex.
  • The stalker added tension.
  • Great sex scenes.
  • Great mystery.

Dislikes:

  • J.X. being so sure everything will be fine and that Kit is just overreacting.
  • Some TSTL moments.

I jumped right into this book after finishing the last one โ€“ one of the perks of coming to the series late since there was a four year publishing gap between books two and three. I loved this book even more than the last ones. All the things I liked had been magnified.

First off, the relationship between Kit and J.X. was stronger than ever. They even moved in together, despite Kit’s fears. And at this point, Kit having fears about the relationship is a given. But all his fears are so understandable and relatable that I don’t mind. J.X. is a rising star while Kit feels like he’s fading.

I wish J.X. had been more accepting of what Kit was feeling instead of trying to tell him it was fine. J.X. didn’t understand, and his constant attempts at bland comfort got annoying. There were times when it felt like J.X. thought Kit was overacting about everything and automatically dismissed his concerns out of hand. Sure, Kit overreacts a lot, but not all the time.

The men definitely have things they need to work out in their relationship, but that’s part of the fun of reading about them. Kit’s discoveries about sex and how he feels he should be were powerful. I’ve never read a book where the couple actually discusses the way sex and the societal images of it can make people feel. It truly was a great moment.

 The mystery was great in this book as well. I think this book had the best combination of romance and mystery so far. Add in Kit’s stalker, the new characters introduced, and the new setting, and this book was full to bursting without being overwhelming.

However, there were moments within the context of the mystery that made me cringe. Bad decisions that made me want to scream at Kit. TSTL โ€“ too stupid to live โ€“ is harsh, but honest. It’s a good thing J.X. was there.

I am once again looking forward to the next book in the series.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Somebody Killed His Editor,ย All She Wrote, andย In Other Wordsโ€ฆ Murder.