Review: Slow Summer Heat by Renae Kaye

A ‘wish fulfillment’ kind of story.

4 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1nd edition. 54 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Geoffrey Saxon is in his forties, a bit plump, a lot fuzzy, and rather boring in bedโ€”and thanks to a very public breakup, everyone in his street knows it. However, what they donโ€™t know is that Geoffrey sometimes watches his hot young neighbor, Vaughn, in the pool. Vaughn has invited Geoffrey to join his pool parties, but Geoffrey knows itโ€™s only pity.

As if things canโ€™t get worse, Geoffreyโ€™s air conditioner breaks during a heat wave in Western Australiaโ€”and just before Christmas. In search of some relief, he camps out in his backyard, where he also has a prime view of Vaughn swimmingโ€ฆ naked. When Geoffreyโ€™s injured falling from his spying post, Vaughn comes to his rescue and Geoffrey doesnโ€™t think he can be more horrified.

But he could be in for a sweet holiday surprise. Is he ready to take the dive?

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Likes:

  • Older main character.
  • Geoffrey’s body issues.
  • How sweet but determined Vaughn was.
  • A willingness to go slow.
  • Funny.

Dislikes:

  • The story felt a little unbelievable.

This story had a wish fulfillment aspect that I both did and didn’t like. On the one hand, just because someone is “ in his forties, a bit plump, a lot fuzzy, and rather boring in bed” does not mean he shouldn’t find romance. In fact, I loved Geoffrey as the main character. He was totally relatable and surprisingly adorable.

On the other hand, I don’t remember Vaughn mentioning anything about why Geoffrey had caught his eye in the first place. Aside from the casual way neighbors greet each other when they pass by, the men didn’t have much contact prior to the start of the story. Vaughn’s interest is basically summed up with a ‘Geoffrey is his type’ kind of non-answer. And while I did enjoy the story, I wanted something more as the reason for Vaughn’s interest. Because it felt a little forced that Geoffrey’s young, buff, tanned neighbor just happened to like pale, older, slightly heavy men.

Not that a little wish fulfillment isn’t nice every once in a while, but I wasn’t feeling that part of the story. Luckily, once I got invested, the rest of the story went great. There were funny moments and sexy moments. I loved that Vaughn was more than willing to go slow for Geoffrey. I also loved that Geoffrey honestly didn’t expect Vaughn to like him back at first.

Geoffrey’s body issues felt so real it hurt. All of the negative things that come along with aging, from wrinkles to lack of exercise leading to unwanted body fat, were right on the money. They gave Geoffrey a legitimate reason to doubt Vaughn’s interest. Plus, Geoffrey’s very public breakup added more fuel for Geoffrey’s embarrassment. Embarrassment Vaughn was determined to overcome.

Overall, this story was funny and sweet. It was the perfect way to wrap up my reading of the Warmest Wishes anthology.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Tulsi Vivah by Anna Kaling

This story was a roller coaster of emotions. Glad to see non-white characters!

4 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1nd edition. 62 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

The festival of Tulsi Vivah ushers in the Hindu wedding season and tears away the love of Kristopherโ€™s life. Three years of passion and tenderness are reduced to a shameful skeleton in the closet as Arjuna submits to the marriage his parents have arranged for him. His family has never even heard Kristopherโ€™s name.

The festival, a ritualistic wedding between the holy basil plant, Tulsi, and her eternal lover, Vishnu, is as much of a play-act as Arjunaโ€™s upcoming nuptials, but he believes the wedding will honor his parents and please Vishnu. So why is his Tulsi plantโ€”whose leaves heal and bless the devout, who is Vishnu’s representative on earthโ€”dying? Arjuna tends to her with all the care of a concerned parent, but it might take more than his devotion to save her. She might need Kris, with his clever green-fingersโ€”and maybe a revived Tulsi can heal two hearts.

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Likes:

  • Rollercoaster of emotions.
  • The ending.

Dislikes:

  • Kristopher’s attitude towards the Tulsi plant in the beginning.
  • The distance Arjuna is willing to go to keep Kris his dirty little secret.
  • Kris forgives Arjuna too quickly.

I was hesitant to read this story because of how steeped in religion the blurb made it seem. And while the religion is important, it wasn’t the central reason the two men had problems.

Arjuna is deeply closeted, to the point that he refused to give Kris a key to his apartment even though they’d been dating for three years. An apartment, I’ll point out, that no one he’s related to lives near. Arjuna didn’t just keep Kris as a dirty little secret, he was almost paranoid about never being seen together.

Despite this, Kris loves Arjuna. Which is why it’s such a shock when Arjuna breaks it off out of the blue. The reason for the breakup isn’t religious, at least not on its face. Arjuna’s mom has cancer and she wants to see him get married. Arjuna believes that his duties to his parents are more important than anything else, and he agrees.

It’s the ‘his duties to his parents supersede everything else’ part that ties into the Hindu religion and Tulsi Vivah. I learned a lot about that little corner of the Hindu faith reading this book, though I can’t say if any of it was correct or not. I actually think the plant and corresponding religious ceremony were a good way to frame Arjuna’s decisions. Decisions that are at odds with Western culture.

Choosing to make your own family happy instead of being with the person you love isn’t something most westerners can easily wrap their heads around. I’ve seen some reviews where people think that Arjuna is a horrible person. I don’t think he is. Sure, he hurt Kris in so many ways, but I do think he honestly thought he was doing what was best.

It took real courage for Arjuna to break off his arranged marriage at the end and choose Kris. Openly this time. The ending was wonderful, with a hint that, while things might not be smooth sailing, there is hope for the future.

I will say that Kris’s negative reaction to the Tulsi plant at the beginning of the story felt a little strange until it was better explained. The fact that, even after they’d broken up, Kris wanted to keep the plant alive showed his devotion to Arjuna.

Overall, this story had me on a rollercoaster of emotions, from laughter to wet eyes. I do think Kris should have made Arjuna grovel a bit more in the end, but that’s just me. ย 


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Warren’s Peace by Emjay Haze

Didn’t hook me.

2.75 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 2nd edition. 54 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

The holidays are a time for second chances.

Warren Blessing lost his wife (two years ago), and his kids decide heโ€™s been alone too long. They send him on a holiday singles cruise so he can meet someone new.

On the flight from Chicago to Miami, he sits next to an attractive man, but when the flightโ€™s over, he doesnโ€™t think heโ€™ll see him again.

Fletcher Hammond is a professional mystery shopper for vacation destinations and travel. After a split from his unfaithful fiancรฉ, heโ€™s embarking on a singles cruise. He meets a lovely gentleman on the flight, whose conversation and cocktails help Fletcher through his fear of takeoffs, but he doesnโ€™t expect to see him again.

As if by fate, a meeting in the shipโ€™s dining room renews their mutual attraction. But can they build a relationship with distance and baggage working against them? Or will they part ways when they return to port?
 

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Likes:

  • Interesting premise.
  • Bit of will they/won’t they at the end.
  • Fletcher is fine with Warren wanting to take things slow.

Dislikes:

  • Didn’t hook me.
  • Never got invested.
  • The men were boring.
  • Skimmed the last quarter of the book.
  • Too much meaningless sex.
  • Telling instead of showing made their days felt like a list.
  • Warren’s ‘only straight for his dead wife’ thing.

Despite the fact that this book didn’t do it for me at all, I will say that the romance is there. Unfortunately, I don’t enjoy romance stories where I don’t care about the characters, and I never cared about Warren or Fletcher.

I was initially interested in this story. The blurb is good and the premise is solid. I can’t pinpoint the spot where things went wrong, but I found myself putting the story down again and again without reading much. That’s my signal that I’m not really interested.

Warren and Fletcher are fine, but not standout characters. It feels mean to say that they’re boring, but they are. They have very little dimension, and despite the length of the book we don’t find out much about them. Warren has two adult children and a dead wife. No idea what he does for a living, his interests, or hobbies. Fletcher is a professional mystery shopper who hates the takeoff and landing part of flying. No idea about his background, personal tastes, or how he got the job in the first place.

The actual part of the story where the men are first getting together is interesting. There’s the usual hesitation about starting something new, and Warren wants to go slow. The fact that Fletcher respects his wishes was really nice.

Then all the gratuitous sex started. I’m usually all for the smutty bits, but not this time. There were maybe two sex scenes that advanced the plot. The rest all felt like filler.

In fact, the last quarter of the book felt like filler. The men did so much as they tried to take in everything on the ship that none of it was shown, it was told. It felt like reading a list of the things the guys did all day.

The ending was fine, with a bit of tension about how they’d get the romance to work when Fletcher travels so much. It was a bit of a high note, because the story was back to focusing on the romance instead of the cruise or the sex.

My final complaint is about Warren’s attitudes towards his late wife. It’s hinted strongly throughout the story that his ‘only straight for her’ excuse was nothing but a cover for wanting children. “Warren explained that except for Sarah, he was certain he was gay. Fletcher wasn’t sure which of the two he was trying to convince.” It was skeevy at best.

Overall, this story just wasn’t for me. I haven’t seen the kinds of harsh criticism for it that I felt, but the majority of its ratings were three stars. I think that, when compared to some of the really good stories in this anthology, this one just falls flat.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Twenty-Nine Hours to Eternity by Elizabeth Noble

Wasn’t hooked, but enjoyed the pagan aspect.

2 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 30 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Being gay and pagan can make for a lonely holiday season, as Ian knows well. Heโ€™s used to celebrating alone. The last place he expects to meet a like-minded guy is at LAX during a twenty-nine-hour layover.

Ianโ€™s never felt so comfortable or compatible with another man, even if there is an air of mystery to Race.

Race is no stranger to holiday isolation, and he decides they should seize the opportunity theyโ€™ve been given and observe the Saturnalia the way it was meant to be. A grand celebration ensues, where every moment is special and every meal a feast. The ancient traditions take on new meaning as the men find meaning in each other. But each of them has a destiny and for their paths to continue together, itโ€™ll take a kind of magic that hasnโ€™t been seen in centuries.

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Likes:

  • Pagan celebration.
  • Ending was interesting.
  • The clues to Rase’s real identity were well placed.

Dislikes:

  • Didn’t keep my attention.
  • Started off with a scene from later in the story.
  • Lots of jumping around.
  • Didn’t develop the characters.
  • Too much telling and not enough showing.
  • Insta-love.
  • Not enough info on the paganism.
  • The outside violence.
  • The blurb didn’t hook me.

The blurb didn’t interest me, so I put this story off for a while. I wish I could say that my feelings of disinterest were proved wrong, but I can’t.

I am not a fan of stories that start off with a scene from later in the story, otherwise known as prolepsis. Frist of all, they’re almost never labeled as such, so I end up confused. Second, it feels like the author doesn’t have the confidence that the reader will continue to the end unless they’re shown something flashy right from the start.

Technically, this book did label the prolepsis by saying it started 6 minutes before eternity. But, as this came at the very beginning of the story, I assumed the time was counting up from 0 to 29 hours, instead of down from 29 to 0, so the labeling didn’t help at all. I still ended up confused, thinking I had somehow missed the part when the two main characters met.

Still, the prolepsis did make me wonder how a happy ending was going to be achieved given the amount of outside violence. It should have clued me in that destiny and magic referenced in the blurb weren’t just hyperbole.

I liked that this story has pagan overtones, but would have liked more explanation. Like when Race gave Ian a gift of two little figurines โ€“ a pitcher for merriment and “the die should be self-explanatory.” Well, it wasn’t self-explanatory for me, thanks. A lot of the other pagan moments in the story, like he holly bush and evergreen boughs, were also not explained, which gave the story an air of pagan window dressing without the substance behind it.

As for the men, they were fine. I honestly don’t know much about them since they weren’t fleshed out. Especially Rase. His history was meant to be a mystery, and that meant that he didn’t get much character definition. He was described physically, but that’s about it. Ian was a little more fleshed out, but not much.

I will give credit where credit is due. The clues to Rase’s real identity were well placed. Obvious after a while, but that’s not a bad thing. His part in the ending was also interesting. Admittedly not my favorite thing in the world, what with leaving so much pain and suffering behind as he and Ian flounce off to a happy eternity, but whatever. It was a happy ending for them, if not for all the people who died.

In the end, this story just didn’t work for me on multiple accounts. The sheer amount of telling and not showing, the jumping around in time, the insta-love. All that would have dropped the rating even without my other complaints. I think the ideas in this story simply aren’t suited to such a short page length.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: The Legend of Gentleman John by T.J. Nichols

Historical and magical with a great ending.

4.75 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 36 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Banyn, a fae, escorts the souls of children to Magh Meall, but one Christmas, he comes for a lad who isnโ€™t quite dead, and he breaks a rule rather than wait while John fights a battle heโ€™ll ultimately lose. So begins a long-running affair that crosses the border between life and death, the human and fae realms, and even oceans to strange countries with different gods and rules.

John Rourke renounced a religion that had no place for him and returned to the old ways. Convicted of theft, he is sentenced to transportation and suffers brutal punishmentโ€”until he escapes to live on his own terms as a bushranger. When vengeance against his tormentor consumes him and threatens his life, John finds he has only one holiday wishโ€”to see his fae lover one last time.

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Likes:

  • Trans character.
  • Amazing ending.
  • Historical and magical setting.
  • Felt very realistic.
  • The horrors John went through were implied without being explicit.

Dislikes:

  • A little depressing.
  • The massive jumps through time and the skipping around in time were a little distracting.
  • Not much was told about Magh Meall.

Another great story from an author who is new to me. I went into this story looking forward to the fey aspect. To my surprise, the fey aspect was just one of many things I liked.

The story is told in segments, with lots of big time gaps and even some back-and-forth in time. It was distracting at first, but ended up working well for the story. The first little chunk of story sets up the immediate action, drawing the reader in while the jumps back in time show what led to that point. Because John is fatally injured at the beginning of the story โ€“ literally the first sentence is “Blood oozed between John’s fingers.” โ€“ it almost feels like he’s reliving the most important moments of his life.

Despite not being mentioned in the blurb, John being trans is a central feature of the story. I think it was handled very well. John is both sympathetic and likeable. There were plenty of hints at the horrors he had to endure, from being a starving runaway to being born in the wrong body to the atrocities visited on him, but none of them were graphic. This story could have gone down a  very dark road but it didn’t.

Still, the story was a bit depressing, seeing how much John struggled. Banyn was the bright spot in his life. The lengths the two of them went for each other was heartwarming. And the ending was perfect in so many ways.

In a way, I would have liked this to be a longer story. Some things, like Magh Meall and Banyn being born human, felt underdeveloped. It would have been nice to see John and Banyn living together. Maybe get a sex scene.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Colina de Lavanda by August Li

Different feel from the other stories, but in a good way.

5 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 50 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Lord protector of whores, thieves, sorcerers, and deviants.

Owning a parcel of land the railroad needs to cross means Edward gets to run the border town around the station as he sees fit. What starts as a place to indulge his varied appetites becomes a haven to societyโ€™s castoffs, and if Edward encourages legends about its founder to flourish, well, heโ€™s not so much a liar as a man who wants to protect all the cultures living in peace. Being mayor means folks might ignore his vices, but they also expect him to fix what goes wrong.

When a crushing heat wave and drought threaten not only the townโ€™s diverse holiday celebrations but its very existence, Edward must turn to the one man heโ€™d rather french kiss a timber rattler than faceโ€”the icily elegant Cantonese mage Edward walked out on but never stopped loving.

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Likes:

  • Completely different feel from the other stories.
  • A good mashup of cultures and ideas.
  • Edward really went through a transition.
  • Hopeful ending.
  • Well written.
  • The history between Edward and Shu.

Dislikes:

  • The world wasn’t well explained.
  • It felt like literally anything could happen.
  • I wanted more information on Shu.

I’ve had August Li on my radar for a while but never got around to reading anything by him. I’m realizing now that I should bump him up the ‘to read’ list.

This story was really interesting. It’s got a completely different feel than the other stories in the anthology. At the outset, it almost seems like the romance isn’t central to the plot. But it’s actually the other way around. The unnatural drought is what leads to Edward’s transformation, and it’s only after that transformation that he can be with Shu again. It all fits together seamlessly.

The magical/mystical elements in the story were both good and bad. It added this great dimension, but it also felt like literally anything could happen. And while I enjoy world building, I like to know the limits.

The mashup of cultures was fun, and also fit the feeling of the town. A place where outcasts and misfits could all live together, the various festivities made sense. Again, I would have loved to see more of the town and the people. The story itself is well contained, but the world its set in is interesting enough that I want to read something else set in Colina de Lavanda.

Having Edward and Shu have a history meant that the core of the romance could be saved until the end. And it was a satisfying and hopeful ending. This is definitely a HFN story. I could see a follow up of Edward and Shu. They aren’t perfect, but their chemistry was great.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: An Everyday Hero by E.J. Russell

Wanted more, in a good way.

5 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 54 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

When Adam Tylerโ€™s sister announced she was pregnant, Adam decided to move from Portland, Oregon, to Phoenix, Arizona, to fully embrace the uncle experience. However, he didnโ€™t count on the move being delayed until three days before Christmasโ€”and three days before his sisterโ€™s due date. And he definitely didnโ€™t count on finding a scorpion in his bedroom. Cue the panicked calls to exterminators.

Garrett Strong doesnโ€™t consider himself at all remarkableโ€”his ex certainly didnโ€™t think soโ€”and Garrettโ€™s pest-control business is circling the drain. Although Adam is his first new client in months, that isnโ€™t the only reason Garrett goes above and beyond for him. He feels a real connection to the younger man and intends to do everything in his power to make sure Adam feels safe and welcome in Phoenixโ€”venomous intruders notwithstanding.

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Likes:

  • Got hooked right from the start.
  • Adam was relatable.
  • Garrett was sweet.
  • They made a great couple.
  • The kind gestures they made towards each other were perfect.

Dislikes:

  • I wanted more.

There are some stories you just get sucked into the moment you start reading. This is one of them.

Adam is so relatable. I’m not a fan of creepy-crawlies, especially if they can kill you. His freak out at finding the scorpion was totally warranted, in my opinion. And despite all the scorpions and other desert dwelling dangers in this book, they weren’t presented in a gross way. I liked that Garett treated them as another part of living in the desert but also gave them the respect they deserved as dangerous animals.

Garett was really sweet with the way he took care of Adam, not only because they had a connection but because he took pride in his job. And the fact that he wasn’t comfortable or familiar with website design or branding felt realistic even in this day and age. Not everyone knows how to make a website, and sometimes the not knowing turns it into something that seems like a much bigger hurdle than it really is.

Honestly, these guys were so cute together. This story is fun and fluffy and had me smiling the entire way through. Plus, the things they did for each other were perfectly in sync with what the other man needed. My only complaint was that I wanted more. I would have happily read an entire novel about these two.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Too Hot for Santa by Helena Stone

Solid story but nothing memorable.

4 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 53 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Jonah Walshโ€™s fledgling acting career in Dublin comes to an abrupt end when a video of him in a compromising position goes viral on social media. The offer of a part in a Christmas play in Sydney, Australia arrives at exactly the right time, although he isnโ€™t sure about celebrating Christmas in the scorching heat. Nick Claseman isnโ€™t happy that the actor he and his sister have hired will be occupying his granny flat. As for Jonahโ€™s enthusiasm for Christmas, Nick doesnโ€™t get it. He hasnโ€™t decorated or celebrated in years.

When Jonah turns out to be anything but a stuck-up starlet with delusions of grandeur, and Nick proves heโ€™s not usually grumpy and borderline hostile, the two men gravitate toward each other. Their attraction morphs into something more when Jonah reacquaints Nick with the pleasures of Christmas and Nick shows Jonah the beauty of Australia. But Jonah is only Down Under for a few months. It would take a Christmas miracle for them to have a future together.

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Likes:

  • Long enough to develop a more complex story and characters.
  • The awkward start.
  • The symbolism of the gifts.
  • The story was solid and the pacing was good.
  • Modern touch of bad viral video.

Dislikes:

  • Not memorable.
  • Nothing new or unique.
  • The men’s personal lives were never shown.

This was a perfectly nice story from an author who is new to me. And honestly, I have very few negative things to say about it. The plot was solid, the characters likeable, and the romance sweet.

That being said, there’s nothing memorable about this story. Despite being an actor, Jonah didn’t stand out on the page. And a lot of Nick’s personality was taken up by being a grump about Christmas. Even the tension in this story โ€“ will Jonah leave Australia when his time in the play is over? โ€“ was less than impactful.

Still, this was definitely a fun read and a nice way to pass the time. I enjoyed the awkward start between the men, as well as the modern touch of Jonah’s career stalling when the compromising video of him goes viral. It was also fun watching Jonah’s Christmas spirit work on thawing Nick’s grouchy exterior.

The symbolism of the gifts they exchanged at the end was a sweet touch. This story definitely had a warm, fuzzy feel to it, as well as showcasing what Christmas in Australia was like. I would have liked to see more of the men’s personal lives, beyond the romance and the play. I think that would have made them a little easier to connect to.

I’ll have to give Helena Stone another shot some time, preferably in a longer format. Especially since she has several series.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: The Faller by Daniel de Lorne

Depressing af.

2.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 1st edition. 46 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Being caught with another man sends Charlie Young fleeing his family to the forests of southwestern Australia to scrape together steamer-passage to the big smoke of London. But life as a timber faller isn’t easy and itโ€™s made worse when the men he works with are brash, bigoted, and often brutal. All except Jack Tapper, whoโ€™s the kind of gentle giant that sets Charlieโ€™s heart racing.

While the other men head into town for Christmas, itโ€™s just Charlie and Jack and acres of forest. But trees tell no tales and a few days alone is the perfect opportunity to indulge a bourgeoning passion. When the men return and find things not as they once were, Charlie and Jack have to make the hard decisions about whether to stay where they are or run for their lives.

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Likes:

  • A historical setting I’ve never read about before.
  • Felt realistic.
  • Well written.

Dislikes:

  • Some jargon I had to look up.
  • Lacks a romance vibe.
  • Depressing.
  • Romance went from zero to a hundred in a flash.
  • Charlie never once fought back.
  • Open ending.
  • So much angst and grit.

If this story wasn’t part of the anthology, I wouldn’t have read it. I could tell from the blurb that it was going to be depressing. I was right. Not just about what Charlie’s life was like as a gay man in 1912, but everything. The tinned food and oozing blisters the flies that “buzzed around his mouth and nose” as he worked.

I expected the depressing part, but not the angst and grit. My own fault. Honestly, what else should I expect? Two gay men living in a time and place where gay men aren’t just shunned but have to fear for their lives. And living around other drunk lumberjacks with easy access to axes? That’s a recipe for trouble.

I’m not familiar with either lumberjacks or railroads, so I had to look up what a railway sleeper was. It was a little strange that the thing Charlie and Jack were making wasn’t described. How hard would it have been to say it was a rectangular block of wood used beneath the metal railway lines?

The romance itself wasn’t bad. Charlie and Jack had a definite connection. But the story really never gave off a romance vibe. It was more about two men who were struggling to find a way to live happily as themselves. The romance was how they accomplished that goal.

Their romance went from zero to a hundred in an instant. It was a little anticlimactic, to be honest. They went from work friends to kissing and blowjobs within a few pages. It worked within the story, but the sudden change lacked an emotional impact.

The ending was also unsatisfying. It’s so open ended. Did Jack and Charlie make it out okay? Did they find a way to live happy lives?

The best thing I can say about this story is that it’s different. It’s about a time, place, and profession I know nothing about. The writing is solid and the elements of the story feel realistic. Despite that, I didn’t like it. I’m going to say that this type of story just isn’t for me.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.

Review: Season to Shimmer by Kim Katil

Too much going on without enough payoff.

2.75 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 1st edition. 52 pages. Published December 1st 2018 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

One morning close to the holidays, Nolan wakes up to two surprises: a distress call from his younger brother and a beautiful man in his bed. Nolan, an art gallery owner, has always been discreet about his sexuality, but when his baby brother plans to come out at the annual family gala, Nolan wants to have his backโ€”and that means showing up with a man of his own on his arm. Nolan knows just the man for the job.

Skylar, who owns a karate studio in St. Augustine, canโ€™t get his one-night stand out of his mind. When he runs into Nolan at his gallery he is more than happy to volunteer his services as arm candy. Out-and-proud himself with his striking blue/green hair, Skylar is all in. Their adventure means a fancy salon, family drama, lots of sex, a ninja hippo, and palm trees lit up in a very suggestive way. By the end of it, what started as a hookup might become much more. 

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Likes:

  • Nolan and Skylar are great characters.
  • Multiple sex scenes.
  • The support given to Den.
  • The romantic plot.
  • Funny moments.

Dislikes:

  • There’s too much going on.
  • There are too many characters.
  • The romance takes a back seat.
  • The characters aren’t described well.
  • Lack of contractions during dialogue.
  • Long blocks of dialogue without knowing who’s talking.
  • Dialogue without much action.
  • Unsatisfying ending with Nolan’s parents.
  • No payoff with the pictures and website.
  • Spa scene added nothing to the story.

Despite the bad rating, I did enjoy this story. It’s got a good premise, but the premise isn’t suited to a short story. You could get an entire romance series out of this one story.

If I hadn’t read the blurb right before I started reading this story, I would have been lost. There’s way too much going on. So many little side stories and extra characters, at one point I actually said out loud, “Who the hell is Cordelia?”

It wasn’t just that there were a lot of characters. Most were introduced in one big lump and weren’t described at all. Jazz and Julia were practically interchangeable, and their constant taking pictures for some sort of website had no payoff and added nothing to the romance. Dem, for all that I loved how the main cast was super supportive of his coming out, is a mystery to me. I have no idea how old he is, other than that he’s a teen.

This story needed to be cut down and the focus put back on the romance. That would give page space to describe the important characters, flesh them out more, and add more action between the dialogue. Because Nolan and Skylar are great characters with a great connection. They deserve to be the main focus.

The multiple sec scenes are hot. I loved that Nolan straight up asked Skylar to make their relationship more serious. But the ending was too much too fast. It felt almost like a proposal and there just wasn’t enough romance in this romance story to make that feel real.

I will definitely give Kim Katilย another shot. This story had potential, and the funny bit about the palm trees was great. Hopefully the next story of hers will be more appropriate to its length.


Find the Warmest Wishes anthology review here and the full list of stories here.