Crunch Time (Work Out #4) by Andrew Grey
3.5 out of 5 stars
Ebook. 110 pages. Published March 16th 2011 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:
When George Higgins agrees to help a soon-to-be-former professional football player rehearse for a guest appearance on a talk show, he doesn’t expect anything to come of it. To his surprise, Darren White shows up on time and actually makes an effort to learn from George. But Darren has definite problems; he can barely read and sounds awful when he speaks. Luckily, George is a teacher and Darren’s motivated. It’s crunch time: the first rehearsal for Talking Sports is looming, and Darren and George will have to work together if they want Darren’s guest appearance-and their budding relationship-to turn into a full-time gig.
Likes:
- Interesting characters.
- Plot that kept me interested.
- Less focus on the workout and more on the men’s personal lives.
- Seeing Darren learn and grow.
- Darren’s perfect Christmas gift.
Dislikes:
- Felt preachy, especially at the beginning.
- Beginning could have been stronger, especially when introducing George.
- Lots of clichรฉs.
- Wish more time had been spent on Darren’s learning process.
- Everything felt rushed. This story could really have used a longer format.
I didn’t realize until I was more than halfway through this book that I managed to accidentally skip the third in the series. But since none of the characters from that book seem to appear in this one, I just kept going.
This book was definitely an improvement over the others that I’ve read. The gym and workouts were still a part of the story, but a small part, which was a nice change. Instead, the men’s lives and personal struggles came to the forefront. I also liked that both men had physical limitations but weren’t defined by them. It was a nice change from the Adonis-like bodies in the first two books.
Both George and Darren are interesting characters. Once I got to know them, I was invested in the story, more than with the first two books in the series. The beginning was a little weak, and didn’t hook me right from the start, but the epilogue was really cute, as was the Christmas gift Darren gave to George. It showed how much he’d come to learn about what was really important in George’s life.
Their relationship was sweet and happened naturally. I liked that they didn’t immediately click and had to get to know each other a bit. I wish the book had been a full length novel instead of a novella. Darren’s learning process, as well as learning to be true to who he was, should have been expanded on. Most of the learning process was summarized in a few sentences, skipping weeks at a time.
What was left in the story was a number of clichรฉs. Both Darren being a football player who has trouble with learning and George’s past relationship drama were both things I feel like I’ve seen lots of times before. Some of the clichรฉs, especially George being a teacher, were used like a soapbox at times, beating the reader over the head with the fact that teachers aren’t paid enough for the work they do. While George being a teacher did come up a lot, it was definitely noticeable when the preaching began.
This is my favorite book in the series so far. I’ve rated it half a star above the others, which might not seem like a lot, but the downsides of the shorter format kept Crunch Time from getting bumped up to four stars.
