Review: Ashes (Men of Hidden Creek Season 2 #1) by H.J. Welch

The characters didn’t have enough of a spark.

3 out of 5 stars

Ebook. Kindle Unlimited. 295 pages. Publish August 5 2018.

Blurb:

โ€œItโ€™s always been you.โ€ 

Kris Novak pours his heart and soul into his job at Hidden Creekโ€™s only gay bar. When an arsonist burns the place to the ground, his whole life goes up in smoke and only his long-time crush can save him. 

Firefighter Remi Washington never told anyone heโ€™s bi, let alone acted on it. But when he temporarily offers his spare room to his best friendโ€™s younger brother, heโ€™s drawn to the twinky, beautiful Kris in a way he canโ€™t ignore. How long before he gives in to this temptation? 

Soon Kris stands accused of having started the fire and he has to fight with all his strength to clear his own name. Will Remi risk outing himself to stand by Krisโ€™s side, or will that closet door remain closed forever? 

Welcome to Hidden Creek, Texas, where the heart knows what it wants, and where true love lives happily ever after. Every Men of Hidden Creek novel can be read on its own, but keep an eye out for familiar faces around town! This book contains a daring rescue, a meddling mommy matchmaker, and enough sparks to start a wildfire.

Likes:

  • Remi’s journey to accepting his bisexuality.
  • Harrison and the role he played.
  • The mystery surrounding the fire.
  • How much Kris cared for the LBGTQ+ community.
  • The characterization of Remi’s dad and Remi’s fears about coming out.

Dislikes:

  • Remi and Chris didn’t have enough of a spark.
  • The awful dirty talk.
  • Too many italics.
  • Too many characters from previous books to be truly standalone.
  • Remi being biracial doesn’t come up at all.
  • The clichรฉd ‘I’ve done something wrong so here’s a dozen red roses’
  • Lots of awkward phrasing.
  • Stereotyping of what gay guys should look like/be.
  • Preachy.

I had a hard time deciding between giving this book 2.5 or 3 stars. I finally decided on the three because, while there was a lot that didn’t work, there were enough things I liked to just barely bump it up to three stars. But it was a close call, and I honestly can’t recommend this book.

I was really into this book at the beginning. The blurb caught my attention and the plot was interesting. Then my interest took a nose dive around halfway through and by the 80% mark I didn’t care at all.

The plot was solid. It just wasn’t executed well. For such a long book, the romance was missing all the little moments between Remi and Kris where their relationship grows. There were big moments, but the times when they hung out casually, playing video games or having dinner, happened off page and received a paragraph of summary at most. Plus it feels like there’s more interaction between the MCs and other characters than with each other. Because of that, the spark between them never caught fire.

I ended up not caring about Remi and Kris’s relationship at all. The only reason I finished the book was because I wanted to know who set the fire. The fire plot, with its hint of mystery, was nicely done.

Remi’s journey was by far the most interesting part of the book. His transformation, both in terms of accepting himself and in realizing that it’s okay for him to do the things he enjoyed – like cooking – was fun to read about. His father’s characterization was also done very well.

I would have thought that Remi being biracial would have come up at least a little, but it wasn’t even touched on. It made me feel like him being biracial was something that was tossed into the story to let his mom score a point near the end.

Then there were the sex scenes. I am usually all for the smutty smut, but after reading the first sex scene, I skipped all the rest. The dirty talk was both terrible and hilarious. Who shouts out ‘honey bun’ in the middle of sex? It was so ridiculous. Not to mention syrupy sweet and a bit clichรฉd after Kris and Remi got together.

Unfortunately, there was no indication on the Amazon page that this book is part of a larger series. And while this book is technically standalone, there were way too many characters from previous books who the reader was obviously supposed to know. It made some scenes, like the brunch at around 40%, very confusing. I had no idea who any of the people were and they weren’t introduced well.

My final big annoyance happened in the epilogue. Kris has no business experience and yet he

While I didn’t care for this book, I liked the setup enough to go and read the others. Starting at the actual beginning this time, of course. The series is written by different authors, so I hope I’ll have better luck next time.

One Snowy Day: An Erotic Gay Short Story By May Lacer

My fifth short story is now out! Get it on Amazon for $2.99 or read it for free with Kindle Unlimited. Find it here.

Blurb:

Brandon doesn’t mind getting snowed in, especially if he’s at home and well prepared for the storm. With forecasters predicting seven inches of snow, he won’t be going anywhere soon. And that’s fine with him. He could use a little bit of R & R.

Best of all, his mom is off visiting family so he has the entire house to himself. Between the movie marathons and junk food, he’s living the dream. But his solitude comes to an end when the doorbell rings.

Justin Marks was best friends with Brandon’s older brother. Brandon hasn’t seen him since Justin went off to college two years ago, and he can’t hide his surprise at the sudden visit. When Justin explains that his car went off the road nearby, Brandon invites him inside to warm up.

Brandon never looked at Justin in a sexual way before. But now, with just the two of them in the house and Justin fresh out of a hot shower, Brandon can’t keep his thoughts pure. He doesn’t plan on doing anything, but when Justin kisses him, Brandon discovers how much fun can be had during a snowstorm.

*This short story contains steamy scenes meant for those 18 and up.

This short story is 40 pages long and approximately 10,700 words.

Review: Daddy Issues by Seth King

I wanted to like this book, but couldn’t.

1 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 222 pages. Published April 10th 2018

Blurb:

Their bond is forbidden. Their relationship could upend lives. But their love? Itโ€™s a force of natureโ€ฆ 

Ten years ago, a desperate and confused Robert Glazer briefly married a woman before confronting his sexuality and starting his life as an out gay man. They divorced and lost contact โ€“ until now. 

Today, a sudden family death throws Robert and his ex-wife back together for the first time. Thatโ€™s where Robert meets her son Eliot, who was raised with his own father and is now a gorgeous โ€“ and openly gay โ€“ adult. And to Robert and Eliotโ€™s surprise, sparks fly. 

Passion ignites, then threatens to explode. Soon Eliot knows three things. One: Robert is not his father figure, and never was โ€“ in fact, he barely remembers him. Two: news of their union would still rock his whole world. And three: he craves Robert more than anything he has ever wanted. And as suspicions arise, their attraction only growsโ€ฆ

Likes:

  • The blurb sucked me in.
  • The prologue made me interested.
  • The cover is hot.

Dislikes:

  • Everything else.

DNF 5%

I was excited when this book showed up in my BookBub email because I was looking for another book to read. What a disappointment.

Maybe I’m getting more picky the older I get (I’ll turn 30 next year) but I had a very strong negative reaction to this book. Which is a shame because the premise was promising. Even the prologue made me eager to read more despite being written in first person present tense, which I generally don’t like.

But when I got to Part 1 of the actual story, everything fell apart in a massive way.

The second sentence is “He’s in town for the funeral” which sets a tone in my mind that this is a somber situation. And that is not born out by what follows next, and I’m not just talking about the insta-lust between Eliot and Robert.

We’re immediately dropped into Eliot’s rambling internal monologue stream-of-consciousness info dump. No real setup of the scene or the location. Just brief mentions of a buffet line and a banquet room and now I have no idea where these characters are. All I know is they’re undressing each other with their eyes.

It’s Eliot’s inner rambling that killed it for me. All the rest of it I could have dealt with. It seriously felt like I was being beaten over the head by the info. I only needed to be told once that Robert was Eliot’s stepfather for a short time, they never lived together, and Eliot never saw Robert as a father figure. Instead, the info was repeated several times.

It got to the point where I just wanted Eliot to shut up. But when I went to skip ahead, I discovered there were no chapter marks in the book. That alone would have taken it down half a star for poor book design.

I skipped ahead to Robert’s point of view and findโ€ฆ more of the exactly the same kind of internal rambling without anything happening to move the plot along. Ugh. What was worse, there was this constant back and forth in the internal monologue. I’ll paraphrase.

This is wrong.

Or is it?

Yeah, definitely wrong.

But he’s so hot, and I want him. How wrong can it be?

Very wrong. Think pure thoughts.

What made me quit for good was Eliot bringing his cheating boyfriend, who has a temper and who Eliot knows he shouldn’t have taken back, with him to his grandmother’s weeklong celebration of life getaway. Eliot admits he’s spineless for tanking his ex back but it’s not his fault, see. He’s southern and has good manners and doesn’t want to rock the boat.

Nope.

On the one hand, I feel really bad because I only got 28 pages into this book. On the other hand, I knew I wouldn’t be able to enjoy any part of this if the beginning got on my nerves this much. Oh well.

Review: The Shamwell Tales Series by J.L. Merrow

Series rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

Books Include:

Likes:

  • Slow burn romances.
  • Quiet little English town.
  • J.L. Merrow’s writing style.
  • Some incredibly quirky characters.
  • Some really great kids.
  • Very little homophobia (and what little there was got overcome in the end).
  • The English slang.
  • Blue collar workers who were proud of their jobs.

Dislikes:

  • Sex scenes were short, not too steamy, and at the end of the books.
  • Some similarities in the types of couples.

To be fair to Out! I did like all the books in this series. The quiet, slow atmosphere of Shamwell was just what I was looking for, but I can see why some people thought it was too slow and boring. This is not a series where a lot of things happen. All of the drama comes either from miscommunication (or no communication at all) or everyday outside forces.

I really liked the English slang in the book, even thought I didn’t know some of it, because it made the books very atmospheric. Shamwell really did become like a subtle character of its own in a lot of little ways. The people who lived there were very simple, in a good way, while the ones who moved there were all on the flamboyant side.

This brings me to the similarities between the books. In each one, one of the two main characters has just moved to town. All the newcomers are well-educated and come from wealthy families or are well off themselves. Their love interests are blue collar working men, except Patrick who works for a non-profit, which is not a high paying job. The men from Shamwell are generally more connected to their families than the men who have just moved there.

Despite these similarities, each of the couples was very different from the others, both in terms of the problems they face and how they interact with each other. I enjoyed reading about all of the couples and nothing glaringly wrong pulled me out of any of the stories.

Out! was my least favorite not because anything was wrong with it but because Patrick and Mark were both less flamboyant characters than the other couples. Rob, David, and Tristan were all fabulous characters with fun, memorable quirks. I donโ€™t think Patrick or Mark was boring per se, but compared to the fabulous three, they didn’t stand out as much. Fen and Lex stood out more.

Overall, I could have happily read more books in this series. It was cute and low angst and I’m really glad I picked it up. Caught! Was the first book I’ve ever ready by J.L. Merrow and I will definitely pick up something else she’s written.

Review: Spun! (The Shamwell Tales #4) by J.L. Merrow

Loved the main characters.

4.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 316 pages. Published July 3rd 2017 by Riptide Publishing

Blurb:

With friends like these . . .

An ill-advised encounter at the office party leaves David Greenlake jobless and homeless in one heady weekend. But he quickly begs work from his ex-boss and takes a room in Shamwell with easygoing postman Rory Deamer. David doesnโ€™t mean to flirt with the recently divorced Roryโ€”just like he doesnโ€™t consciously decide to breathe. After all, Roryโ€™s far too nice for him. And far too straight.

Rory finds his new lodger surprisingly fun to be with, and whatโ€™s more, David is a hit with Roryโ€™s troubled children. But while Roryโ€™s world may have turned upside down in the last few years, thereโ€™s one thing heโ€™s sure of: heโ€™s straight as a die. So he canโ€™t be falling for David . . . can he?

Their friends and family think they know all the answers, and Davidโ€™s office party hookup has his own plans for romance. Rory and David need to make up their minds and take a stand for what they really wantโ€”or their love could be over before itโ€™s even begun.

Likes:

  • Rory and David, both individually and as a couple.
  • Friends to lovers romance.
  • How accepting Rory is.
  • How the romance is sweet and slow.
  • Gregory the teddy bear.

Dislikes:

  • Barry (although I think he was meant to be hated)
  • Rory’s ex-wife and current husband.
  • How people didn’t seem to think much of David and his ability to stick with things.

I’ve been looking forward to this book ever since I found out that David was going to be one of the main characters. I loved him in Out! and I love him in this book. Is he perfect? No, but that makes him human. And we really see his growth through the story.

I was a little uncertain about Rory going into this book. He’s never been interested in guys and he has an ex-wife and kids. I really didn’t see how he and David were going to fit together, but they did. Rory is like a marshmallow with a core of steel. He does let others push him around a little too much, but watching him stand up for David and their relationship showed his true inner strength.

The friends to lovers trope is one I enjoy, and this book had it in spades. David and Rory start off as roommates of a sort and quickly become friends. The romance takes time but it’s believable. As is them staying together in the long run. Seeing David and Rory interact with Rory’s kids really makes them feel like they became a family by the end.

There were a number of characters in the book who were less than pleasant, but they were supposed to be. I’m glad that

I love books where you can really feel that a couple is going to be able to weather any storm that comes up, even after the last word is written. I feel that way with David and Rory. I would never have thought they’d be a good couple, but they were. Best of all, they were a great couple to end the series with!


Be sure to check out the review for the other three books in the series – Caught!, Played!, and Out!, as well as the series review.

Between the Sheets: An Erotic Gay Short Story by May Lacer

My fourth short story is now available on Amazon! I am so excited, not to mention proud of myself for keeping to my schedule for a month. Between the Sheets is available for purchase for $2.99 or read it for free with Kindle Unlimited. Find it here!

Blurb:

Danny has had a terrible day at work. The college IT department has been flooded with calls as professors and students freak out about not being able to access their grade sheets. Danny has explained the same thing over and over all day, and wants nothing more than to go home and eat comfort food.

Luckily, he has an amazing boyfriend. When Logan texts and offers to make dinner, he also promises a surprise when Danny gets home. It’s the motivation Danny needs to get through the last hour of work. 

At home, Danny’s confused when Logan leads him to the bedroom and tells him to sit on the bed. But when his hand brushes the sheets, he understands. He’s never had silk sheets before, but Danny quickly realizes just how the luxurious softness can add to their lovemaking. 

*This short story contains steamy scenes meant for those 18 and up.

Between the Sheets is 25 pages long approximately 7000 words.

Review: Out! (The Shamwell Tales #3) by J.L. Merrow

I loved Mark’s gradual coming out.

3.75 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 322 pages. Published January 19th 2016 by Samhain Publishing

Blurb:

When the costs are added up, will love land in the black?

Mark Nugent has spent his life in the closetโ€”at least, the small part of it he hasnโ€™t spent in the office. Divorced when he could no longer deny his sexuality, heโ€™s sworn off his workaholic ways and moved to Shamwell with his headstrong teen daughter to give her a stable home environment.

His resolve to put his love life on hold is severely tested when he joins a local organization and meets a lively yet intense young man who tempts him closer to the closet threshold.

Patrick Owen is an out-and-proud charity worker with strong principlesโ€”and a newly discovered weakness for an older man. One snag: Mark is adamant heโ€™s not coming out to his daughter, and Patrick will be damned if heโ€™s going to start a relationship with a lie.

Between Markโ€™s old-fashioned attitudes and a camp, flirtatious ex-colleague who wants Mark for himself, Patrick wonders if theyโ€™ll ever be on the same romantic page. And when Markโ€™s former career as a tax advisor clashes with Patrickโ€™s social conscience, it could be the one stumbling block they canโ€™t get past.


Warning: Contains historically inaccurate Spartan costumes, mangled movie quotes, dubious mathematical logic and a three-legged pub crawl. 

Likes:

  • Patrick and Mark and the people who try to get them together.
  • The Spartans and all the ways they try to collect money for charity.
  • Mark’s gradual process to coming out.
  • The focus on how age difference meant different experiences.

Dislikes:

  • Fen’s overblown teenage reactions.
  • Patrick had trouble seeing things from Mark’s point of view.
  • Mark’s parenting style needs work.
  • Not memorable.

Of the series this far, this book has made the least impression on me. I liked it well enough while I was reading it, but I find myself struggling to remember it even a day later. The previous two sets of main characters all had their defining thing โ€“ Rob with his bowties, Sean with his motorcycle, Tristan with his theatrics, and Con with his size.

Mark and Patrick don’t have a defining thing about them in the same way. That’s not to say they weren’t interesting, but I felt like the secondary characters really stole the show in many of the scenes they were in. Fen, David, and Lex had that ‘something extra’ that really made them stand out on the page, and I’m so happy David is going to be one of the main characters in the next book.

I did really like that Mark isn’t out of the closet at the start of the book. Watching him go through the process of getting comfortable enough to come out to everyone was nice, as was the acknowledgement that things were very different for LGBTQ+ people twenty years ago. Patrick had a hard time understanding this, and it led to a number of complications, but it also led to some honest and open moments.

I think my favorite part about J.L. Merrow’s writing is her ability to create great characters. And Fen was definitely an authentic teenager. Which made her a little annoying. I did end up liking her a little bit, especially her meddling in her father’s love life. Mark was trying his best to parent her, but sometimes I wished he’d just put down some rules and stick to them.

I’m so excited to get to David’s story next. I would have been mad if he didn’t get a happy ending of his own. And of course I’m looking forward to spending a little more time in Shamwell. On to the next book!

Note: I used the book cover was on the ebook I read. There is a different cover on Goodreads.


Be sure to check out the review for the other three books in the series – Caught!, Played!, and Spun! as well as the series review.

Review of Hope Series by Cardeno C.

A sweet, low angst series.

3.5 out of 5 stars

Books include:

Likes:

  • Short, sweet, and cute.
  • Good smut.
  • Small town setting.
  • Low angst.
  • Good novella stories.

Dislikes:

  • Wanted more about the couple.
  • Wanted to see more about the town and townspeople.
  • Stories felt a little similar.

These three books were all novellas set in the same small town of Hope, Arizona. They were all fun, quick, hot, fluffy reads without angst. As fitting the shorter length, all of the couples already knew each other when their story started.

It’s a little difficult to judge these book because they are novellas and not novels. A lot of my little complaints are simply me wanting more. More background on the characters, more time after the couple gets together, more info about the town.

There aren’t many side characters and we don’t get to see how anyone reacts to three openly gay couples. Because the troubles keeping these three couples apart are easy to fix, I don’t think they could be pushed to full novels without dragging on, but I am the type of reader who always wants a little bit more.

The setup for these novellas all feel a little similar. All have one character who has lots of experience while the other has little or none. All the couples have misunderstandings and all have a huge gap between them. For two of the couples, that gap is an age gap. For the third, that gap is city vs country.

I would suggest this series for anyone looking for something quick and sweet, with a dash of hot sex. The series is not something to really sink your teeth into, both in terms of the length and the depth of the characters. Still, I’m glad I stumbled on them because I do like Cardeno C’s writing style and will definitely read more from them later.

*Credit to congerdesign for the picture.

Review: Played! (The Shamwell Tales #2) by J.L. Merrow

The whole cast of characters was great.

3.75 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 214 pages. Published June 30th 2015 by Samhain Publishing

Blurb:

All the worldโ€™s a stage…but real-life lessons are hidden in the heart.

Tristanโ€™s in Shamwell for one last summer of freedom before he joins the family firm in New Yorkโ€”no more farting around on stage, as his father puts it. But the classically trained actor canโ€™t resist when members of the local amateur dramatics society beg him to take a role in their production of A Midsummer Nightโ€™s Dream.

Especially as heโ€™ll also be giving private acting lessons to gorgeous local handyman, Con, whoโ€™s been curiously resistant to Tristanโ€™s advances. Tristanโ€™s determined to get Con in his bedโ€”not only is the man delicious, thereโ€™s fifty pounds riding on Tristanโ€™s success after a bet made with his drama school chum Amanda.

Conโ€™s never dared to act before. A late-diagnosed dyslexic who had a hard time at school, heโ€™s always been convinced heโ€™d never be able to learn his linesโ€”but with Tristan helping him, he might just be in with a chance. Trouble is, the last time Con fell for a guy, he ended up getting his heart broken, and with Tristan due to leave the country in a matter of months, Conโ€™s determined not to give in and start anything thatโ€™s bound to finish badly.

Just as Tristan thinks heโ€™s finally won Conโ€™s heartโ€”and given his own in returnโ€”disaster strikes. And the curtain may have fallen forever on their chance of happiness.


Warning: contains a surfeit of Bottoms and asses, together with enough mangled quotations to have the Bard of Avon gyrating in his grave. 

Likes:

  • The cast of characters.
  • The slow burn that kept me interested.
  • Seeing a glimpse of Rob and Sean from the last book.
  • That Shamwell as a town was expanded.
  • All the quotes from plays.
  • J.L. Merrow’s wonderful writing voice.

Dislikes:

  • Both Tristan and Con could have grown more as people.
  • Some things that had more of an impact on the characters could have been expanded on while others that had less impact could have been made less important.
  • Both Con and Tristan had their annoying bits.

I really did enjoy this book, which was why I had such a hard time rating it. It was a cute, fun, fluffy read without much of that rip-your-heart-out angst. Sure, the characters had their issues, and their fair share of drama, but you really got the feeling that they would make it work out in the end somehow (even knowing that, since this is a romance book, of course they would work it out and get together).

I am a fan of opposites attract romances, and this one worked well. Both Tristan and Con have things they need to work on, and they both have a lot to give. Their strengths and weaknesses match up very well. They’re not a perfect couple, and I feel like their romance is on less firm of a footing than Sean and Rob’s from the previous book, but I did like watching them get together.

I was surprised when reading other people’s reviews how many people hated Tristan and loved Con. I found them both to be imperfect but ultimately redeemable.

Tristan is self-absorbed in a way only an actor from a wealthy family can be. He honestly doesn’t look around himself too often at other people and how they live. And his wealthy upbringing shows in a lot of little ways. But one thing I will say in Tristan’s defense is that he’s never intentionally mean or cruel. He’s oblivious and puts his foot in his mouth a number of times, but he also knows when he’s messed up and tries to make amends.

Con is something of a sweet and gentle giant. One with a huge chip on his shoulder and paper thin skin due to how he’s been treated in the past, both by his mom and by the public school system. Con has such low self-esteem that it makes him think the worst of Tristan, assuming that Tristan is making fun of him when they first meet, which leads Con to act like a jerk.

Despite their many faults, it’s clear that these two very different men can help each other. Because when it comes down to it, they’re both looking for a forever home where they can be happy.

The cast of characters, while great, were something of a distraction at times. I thought that both Con and Tristan’s family lives could have been expanded on, because both clearly had such profound effects on the men they became.

The main character from the next book in the series, Patrick, was introduced, and I can’t wait for the next installment of the series!


Be sure to check out the review for the other three books in the series – Caught!, Out!, and Spun! as well as the series review.

Study Buddy: A Gay Erotic Short Story

My third short story is up on Amazon! Buy it for $2.99 or read for free on Kindle Unlimited. Find it here!

Stephan isn’t holding out hope that the hot guy in his college French class is gay, but that doesn’t stop him from fantasizing about Malik. Tall, with a killer smile and skin like cafรฉ au lait, Malik caught Stephan’s attention on the first day of class.

After Stephan is forced to answer a phone call from his sister in front of the entire class โ€“ his punishment for forgetting to turn off his phone โ€“ Malik comes up and talks to him for the first time. What starts off as some friendly advice quickly turns into friendship. But Stephan wants more. 

A private study session has Stephan putting extra care into his appearance even though he knows he can’t turn a straight guy. But is Malik really as straight as Stephan assumes? When they’re alone at Malik’s apartment, things quickly go from friendly to steamy, and Stephan realizes that Malik could be more than just a study buddy. 

*This short story contains steamy scenes meant for those 18 and up.