Review: The Capital (The Knight and the Necromancer #1) by A.H. Lee

Great start to a series, but I wasn’t expecting the sudden cliffhanger.

5 out of 5 stars

E-book. Kindle Unlimited. 162 pages. Published March 23rd 2020

Blurb:

Itโ€™s a classic fairytale: Knight meets necromancer. They argue. They fight. Theyโ€ฆmake out?

Prince Roland comes home from the war to bury his father and see his sister on the throne. He sneaks out to his favorite tavern for nostalgiaโ€™s sake. Itโ€™s the place where he kissed a man for the first time, the place where he used to carouse with the lover he buried on a battlefield.

Roland expects to enjoy some anonymity and perhaps flirt with a few strangers for old timeโ€™s sake. He does not expect to find a fascinating scholar from out of townโ€”a lonely young man with beautiful eyes and an obvious longing to be touched, buried beneath a prickly demeanor. The man clearly has his secrets, but so does Roland, and their unexpected chemistry makes him feel alive for the first time in months.

Roland exerts all his knightly charm and is rewarded by the promise of a second date. He figures heโ€™ll need something to look forward to tomorrow, since he must spend the day in council with his familyโ€™s sworn enemyโ€”a necromancer whom his sister has rashly invited to consult about the war.

Sairis is a necromancer with a price on his head. He knows that he will have to bargain for his life tomorrow. Heโ€™s never been this far from his tower. Heโ€™s good with magic, not people. Heโ€™s frightened, although he doesnโ€™t want to admit it.

Sairis knows heโ€™s doing something foolish by visiting a tavern the evening before his meeting with the royalsโ€”a tavern that caters to men of certain tastes. But Sairis wants things. Things a hunted outlaw can never have.

He tells himself that heโ€™ll just watchโ€”see what ordinary people enjoy every day. Sairis is confident in his ability to intimidate anyone who comes too close.

Heโ€™s shocked when a dazzling mountain of a man is not intimidated in the slightest. Sairis knows a knight when he sees one. He has killed plenty of knights. But this knight is funny and kind. Sairis finds his defenses melting in spite of his best efforts. Maybe he could go on a second date with this person.

Of course, heโ€™ll have to get through tomorrow firstโ€ฆwhen he must bargain with the hated royals who have persecuted him all his life.

Likes:

  • Quick read.
  • Hooked me right from the start.
  • World building.
  • Characters.
  • Romance.
  • Mystery element.

Dislikes:

  • Abrupt ending with a cliffhanger.

I loved this book. I was looking for a high fantasy gay romance, and it delivered. The book is probably closer to a novella in length, but the plot moved at such a good pace that it doesn’t feel like anything has been left out. I actually enjoyed the short length, because I finished reading in record time.

That could be because I didn’t want to put the book down. I was hooked from the very start. The characters and their situation were so compelling. The instant attraction between Saris and Roland got the romance moving right from the start, while their respective positions kept them at odds. Both were great characters in their own rights. They came from different places, had different opinions, and had different life experiences, but they fit together well.

I was rooting for them the whole way through. The romance is paced really well, so that they get to know and trust each other while never forgetting that the kingdom is in danger. It was a perfect balance.

The non-romantic plot was well structured. There were traitors, a massive threat to the kingdom, and plenty of people working to promote their own agenda. That brought in a mystery element as everyone tried to figure out who was plotting what.

I loved that Daphne was not just a figurehead but a strong woman. Her being the kingdom’s first ever queen was a nice touch. It showed how much things had changed over the past few decades. I always appreciate when authors are able to tell me things about the world without resorting to info dumps, and this book handled that perfectly.

The cliffhanger caught me off guard. It happens at a good time, but it did make me worried about whether or not the next book was out yet. Happily, all three books in the series were published at the same time, so I was able to instantly download the second book and get reading. This series is truly a series, with the plot continuing seamlessly from one book to the next. If you like the first book, you’ll want to get the second immediately.

Review: Misfit Mage (Fledgling God #1) by Michael Taggart

The concept isn’t bad, but the book is in serious need of a good editor. DNF 49%

3 out of 5 stars

Ebook. Kindle Unlimited. 339 pages. Published April 26th 2019

Blurb:

He went searching for a fresh start. He didnโ€™t expect to find unusual friends, fierce enemies, and primal powers.

Jason thought that it was the end of his life after being hunted and attacked by a band of ruthless thugs. Instead, he tapped into the source of creation and emerged from his Death Experience with magical powers.

As a new mage, Jason finds himself part of a wonderful – and dangerous – new supernatural world. He also finds himself in the middle of a mage war as he becomes part of an unlikely group of protectors who are defending a mystical mansion from those who want to destroy it.

Jason has little power, and the band of misfits are on the losing side, until he discovers he can see and manipulate magic at a remarkable level. What he detects begins his journey into discovering how his new powers really work, and just might be the edge that they need to survive.

Likes:

  • Started off great.
  • The Fog of Jonah.
  • It’s obvious that the author put a lot into building the world and magic system.
  • Unique story premise.
  • Interesting characters.

Dislikes:

  • Graphic torture scene.
  • Not a romance.
  • Constant info dumps.
  • Lack of contractions make dialogue feel stilted.
  • Huge chunks of explanatory dialogue were a slag to read.
  • Too much repetition.
  • None of the ‘teachers’ actually had all the answers.
  • Book needs to be edited by a ruthless professional.

DNF 49%

I’ve never given a book I didn’t finish three stars before. Usually, if it’s bad enough for me not to finish, it’s so bad I didn’t enjoy it. I did enjoy this bookโ€ฆto a point.

The premise of this book is interesting. It hooked my attention right from the start. The naked chase scene was funny. I was curious about what was going on.

Then the graphic torture scene happened. I don’t consider myself squeamish, but it was almost too much for me. This book popped up on Amazon when I went looking for a romance. The torture scene almost made me dump the book. Romance and torture is not a fusion I enjoy. But I forced myself to get through the scene because I wanted to see of the book could hook me again.

It didn’t, not like at the beginning. I began reading this book on February 15. I gave up on it March 24 after reading 49%. There were just too many things that turned me off. I’d pick up the book, read a few pages, get annoyed at the info dump or the repetition, and put it down again.

I think there is a fantastic book buried under all the amateur mistakes. It’s like a diamond in the rough. But like a diamond, to get it to sparkle you have to cut away the excess and polish the rough spots.

The biggest issue is the info dumps. It’s not just one or two. They’re everywhere. It’s like the story moves forward as something dramatic happens, usually involving Jason getting hurt, followed by long passages of explanations about magic. Normally I’m all for world building. I love it. But this was too much. It slowed the story down to a crawl. The explanatory dialogue was the worst. It was dense and I knew I wasn’t going to remember most of it. Maybe that’s why there was so much repetition.

A lot of the need for explanation came from Jason being special. He can do things that Sandy โ€“ Jason’s magic ‘teacher’ โ€“ has never encountered before. That got annoying as well. Just once I wanted someone to give Jason โ€“ and me โ€“ a simple answer instead of having to investigate every little thing because it’s totally new to them.

That being said, I did like the side characters. They were all interesting. As was the Fog of Jonah, the magical protection that prevented normal humans from finding out about magic.

It’s probably a good thing this book wasn’t an actual romance. It has a thread of romantic possibility, but nothing big. There’s honestly no room for a fully-fledged romance, not with all the magic.

If this book ever got the professional edit it needed, I would absolutely give it another shot. I don’t picture that happening since a lot of people rated the book five stars. Good for them for sitting through the info dumps. I just couldn’t. With so many books out there that have fewer problems, it wasn’t worth forcing myself to finish Misfit Mage.

Review: The Aloysius Tales by Tara Lain

Do not recommend. The base idea is good but the final product is deeply flawed.

2.5 out of 5 stars

Books include: 

Likes:

  • Aloysius as a cat.
  • Most of the characters, individually.
  • Good smut.

Dislikes:

  • Non-con.
  • Rape.
  • Non-con and rape wasn’t addressed.
  • Lack of world building.
  • Lack of magic.
  • Not good rereads.
  • Bland romance.
  • Many characters lacked maturity.

I would not recommend this series. It’s from an author that I usually enjoy, and the basic idea of the series is interesting, but the final product is deeply flawed.

There isn’t really a standout book in this series. Usually, at least one book will shine even if the others don’t. That didn’t happen this time. With all three books, my dislikes outweighed my likes by a mile.

Individually, most of the characters weren’t bad. They were different and diverse, and all had something likeable about them. Too bad they had raging cases of insta-lust, clichรฉd pasts, and didn’t act like powerful witches.

The basic idea of the overarching plot wasn’t bad, but the world building was almost nonexistent and the magic was sparse. It didn’t feel like a lot of thought and attention had been put into fitting all the pieces together. When I finished each book, the inconsistencies and plot holes were huge, even if I didn’t notice them as I was reading.

Two of the three books had instances of either rape or non-consent that was never addressed. The bad guys weren’t punished for their transgressions. It bothered me a lot, partly because the bad guys did get punished for other things, making it feel like the rape was so minor it didn’t even get mentioned. But also because this is not the first time Tara Lain has included sexual assault in her books without addressing it later on. It’s because of the sexual assault and how it makes me think negatively of Lain, that I’ve decided to step away from reading her books for a while.

Lastly, as I discovered, these books don’t make for good rereads. The plots all have mystery elements that drive the action forward. Once the mystery is solved, it’s obvious how shaky the romance itself is.

I had high hopes for this series. There are good urban fantasy romances out there, but The Aloysius Tales isn’t one of them.

Series Review – The Triad of Magic by Poppy Dennison

Overall a good series, but not without its flaws. I liked the overarching plot running through everything.

4 out of 5 stars

Likes:

  • The characters.
  • The world of mages, vampires, and werewolves is different from what I’m used to reading.
  • The plot and pacing.
  • The kids.
  • Everything was wrapped up well in the end.
  • The relationship between Simon and Gray.
  • The relationship between Cormac and Liam.

Dislikes:

  • The ending of each book feels abrupt, as does the ending of the series as a whole.
  • The final villain battle was unsatisfying.
  • Cade and Rocky’s relationship was underdeveloped.
  • Wild Magic felt unnecessary and was a poor ending to the series.

This series is one that, if you like it, you’ll want to read it quickly. The series has one overarching plot, with little time passing between books. If you, like me, tend to forget little plot points if you wait for a while, I would suggest not waiting. This would be a good series to take on vacation if you know you’ll have time to go through them in a couple of days.

While this series has its problems, Simon and Gray are strong characters who are present through all three full length books. Their constant presence as main characters for the entire series makes this trilogy different from the romance series I’m used to. I expected the first book to be about Simon and Gray, the second to be about Rocky and Cade, and the third to be about Liam and Cormac, with each couple clearly being the main focus of their respective book. That wasn’t what this series did.

I didn’t mind getting to see more of Simon and Gray’s relationship, because there was a lot going on that couldn’t be neatly wrapped up in one book. But the blurbs of Body Magic and Soul Magic underplayed the presence of Simon and Gray’s relationship in each book.

With regards to Wild Magic, I almost wish it hadn’t been included. It doesn’t do much for the big plotline, and forces the series to end on a whimper, not a bang.

Overall, I enjoyed the series. It was different from a lot of other romance books in several key ways, and that made it feel fresh and new. I wouldn’t mind reading more from Poppy Dennison in the future.

Review: Soul Magic (The Triad of Magic #3) by Poppy Dennison

My favorite book in the series.

4.5 out of 5 stars

Ebook, 220 pages. Published May 6th 2013 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

Blood runs soul-deep. Cormac hasnโ€™t been the same since the night the High Moon Pack was attacked. With his magic weakened, heโ€™s consumed by a bloodlust he hasnโ€™t felt since he first became a vampire. His need to replenish his power makes him a danger to his last remaining family member, and his hunger makes him careless. And thatโ€™s just the beginning of his troubles. Feeding from pack beta Liam Benson was supposed to slake his appetite, not leave him craving more.

Simon Osborne and Gray Townsend are trying to fight a being history says shouldnโ€™t existโ€”one with all three types of magic. The pack must use all of their resources to combat the mysterious triad, even turning to the shady Council of Mages for help. While Cormac struggles to reconcile his past failures with his current desires, Simon must attempt the impossible: an alliance between mind, body, and soul.

Likes:

  • Everything that was good about the previous books was good about this one โ€“ pacing, story, familiar characters.
  • Questions were finally answered and the book wrapped up nicely.
  • Cormac and Liam’s relationship.

Dislikes:

  • The ending felt abrupt.
  • I don’t quite understand how Simon defeated the villain.

This is my favorite book in the trilogy. I read it in one day.

Cormac has been an interesting character from the beginning, and we finally get a book about him. And it is about him, thankfully. He and Liam are definitely the main characters in the book, even though Simon and Gray still get their page time. I’m really glad this book wasn’t like the previous one and that Cormac and Liam got a fully fleshed out romance.

With the appearance of the mastermind villain, who feels kind of like a final boss, the High Moon Pack is facing the most trouble yet. And not just from the villain. The Were Council members are still around, the Mage Council sends its representative, and another mixed race couple have come to the pack seeking a place to belong. Add in Cormac acting strange after the attack at the end of the last book, and there are plenty of problems to sort out.

This book has a lot going on but it’s paced so nicely that nothing feels out of place or rushed. I liked that the very start established Liam’s attraction to Cormac and that their relationship had a dramatic change in the second chapter. And even though their relationship was still new and would probably need work like Simon and Gray’s did, Cormac and Liam had a solid foundation to their romance by the end of the book.

Since I was reading the four book bundle, I didn’t expect the epilogue at the end. I thought the story of the High Moon Pack would continue well into the next book. And I have to admit, the epilogue was a little bittersweet. It’s set decades after the end of the book, and showed how happy everyone was โ€“ fitting for an epilogue. But it was all about things that I honestly would have liked to see.

I think this kind of a series, where there will undoubtedly be trials and tribulations for some time to come, would have benefitted from a number of novellas to wrap things up and also to really show what happened to everyone. It’s nice to hear about it in the epilogue, but reading about it firsthand would have been better.

My biggest complaint is that the final battle with the villain felt a littleโ€ฆ like it needed to be dramatic without killing anyone important. So how Simon actually won and lived was a little vague. Willpower and love. It was kind of unsatisfying. As was how relatively short the fight was. Like, this was the big fight that the series has been working up towards, and they only won because Simon is special.

ย Overall, I’m glad I picked up this trilogy. It was my first time reading Poppy Dennison and I’d pick up a book of hers again.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Mind Magic,ย Body Magic,ย Wild Magic, and the series review.

Review: Body Magic (The Triad of Magic #2) by Poppy Dennison

Because the plot continued from the first book, Rocky and Cade didn’t get as much page time as they deserved.

4 out of 5 stars

Ebook. 206 pages. Published September 10th 2012 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb:

A pack is only as strong as its weakest member. Rocky Harris knows how the system works. Heโ€™s been on the bottom rung his whole life. But when his alpha consigns him to the High Moon Pack to help them improve security, he finds his beliefs not just challenged but outright assaulted.

Cade Montgomeryโ€™s confidence took a hit when the packโ€™s cubs were kidnapped on his watch. Heโ€™s prepared to do anything to protect his family, even if it means working with Rocky. Maybe Cade doesnโ€™t trust Rocky, but with the turmoil surrounding pack Alpha Grayโ€™s unpopular decision to break tradition and mate with a mage named Simon, Cade knows more threats are coming.

Then someone declares war on shifters and puts the entire pack in danger. Cade and Rocky will need each otherโ€™s strengths to survive the impending battleโ€”and the power of their growing attraction.

Likes:

  • The plot continued from the last book, answering questions and keeping my interest.
  • The introduction of Riley and the expansion of the shifter world.
  • Introduction of a new villain and more problems, all of which continue to push the plot forward without dragging anything out.

Dislikes:

  • Rocky and Cade didn’t get as much page time as I had expected.
  • Their relationship felt little flat and underdeveloped.

I went into book two with a lot of unanswered questions. Some of them were answered, though more were introduced. I don’t mind because it keeps me interested in what will happen next.

Most of the romance series I’ve read before focused heavily on each couple during their book, leaving the rest of the characters as side characters. Not so with this book, which was a surprise. Rocky gets the first chapter, but his and Cade’s romance is really nothing but a subplot. This book’s main characters are very much still Simon and Gray. Which makes sense because they’re at the heart of the strange things happening, and I’m not mad that they’re the focus of this book. But it does make me feel a little cheated.

I came into this book expecting a story about Cade and Rocky and I didn’t really get that. Sure, they have an occasional chapter about the two of them, but they didn’t get nearly as much time as Gray and Simon. It’s frustrating, because the book blurb made it seem like it was all about Cade and Rocky.

Aside from that complaint, I did like both Rocky and Cade. Rocky’s situation within his own pack has put a major chip on his shoulder but it’s nice to watch him come to realize what a good pack should be, and I’m happy with how things ended up for him. Introducing a bit of racial conflict with Cade being mixed race and the only black man in the pack was both a nice way to have him understand a bit of what Rocky felt by being different, but also didn’t really have much of an impact. I feel like it could have been done better.

With the introduction of the very cute Riley, the shifter world got a bit bigger, as well as showing that the High Moon Pack’s problems are far from over. Throw in the Were Council members, a betrayal, and an attack, and there was plenty of tension at the end of the book.

Overall, while I was glad that the plot continued seamlessly from the first book, my main complaint is the lack of time spent building Cade and Rocky’s relationship. The physical attraction is there, but the more emotional part, the part where the relationship really gets a nice solid foundation, is lacking. It would actually have started right about where the book stops, after Rocky heroically defends the cubs from the new villain. With this, their relationship can really begin, except that the book ends.

Honestly, as much as I was fully geared up for Rocky and Cade’s relationship, what I remember most from this book was Gray and Simon’s part. And I’m writing this review the day after I finished reading the book! Maybe it’s because I know more about Simon and Gray, but I really feel like it was because Rocky and Cade didn’t have enough page time for me to get attached to them.

Looking back on their relationship, I think that part of why Rocky and Cade had such a weak relationship is that nothing they did really had any effect on the overarching plot. Sure, Rocky had secrets, but they didn’t mattered in the end.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Mind MagicSoul MagicWild Magic, and the series review.

Review: Mind Magic (The Triad of Magic #1) by Poppy Dennison

A good start to a series, but ends with lots of unanswered questions.

4 out of 5 stars

Paperback. 200 pages. Published April 23rd 2012 by Dreamspinner Press

Blurb.

Magical species must never mix. According to the rules, Simon Osborne should ignore the childrenโ€™s cries for help. After all, theyโ€™re werewolf cubs, and heโ€™s an apprentice mage. But for once in his life, Simon breaks the rules and rescues the cubs, saving them from a demon intent on draining them of their magic.

Of course, all actions have consequences, and Simonโ€™s bold move earns him the displeasure of his peers and the attention of the cubsโ€™ alpha, a man named Gray Townsend.

The last thing Gray needs is a mage in his life, but Simon did save his son. Since Simon is now a friend of the pack, Gray doesnโ€™t have much choice about itโ€”or the forbidden attraction that goes along with it. Unfortunately for the alpha, he needs Simonโ€™s help to track down the demon behind the kidnappingsโ€”before it strikes again. Simon and Gray must join forces to protect the pack, even as they struggle to resist the temptation that threatens to destroy them both. 

Likes:

  • Good start to a series.
  • Interesting characters all around.
  • Unique take on the relationship between werewolves, mages, and vampires.
  • Great mystery.
  • Decent romance.

Dislikes:

  • Lots of unanswered questions about what is going on more broadly (the mystery itself was wrapped up).

This book is a good start for the series, introducing the mages, werewolves, and vampires that seem to make up the three different types of magic users in this world. The book also focuses on the fact that the three species don’t interact with one another, which is not only a main point of this book but also seems like it will be a main point of the other books going forward.

Most of the tension in this book comes from the fact that werewolves and mages don’t mix. It’s the main reason why Gray and Simon are a little hesitant to give in to their instant attraction. And it is instant attraction, not instant love, which is nice.

This book provides a nice deviation from some typical tropes, with the fact that Gray has a son, Garon, and also nicely explains why Gray isn’t involved with Garon’s mother. The werewolf laws and hierarchy are different enough to be interesting but not super important to the story, except to explain why Gray is basically on his own when it comes to finding a solution to his problems.

Big plus for making Garon seem like a kid without being super annoying. Also a big plus that Gray, while being an alpha, wasn’t an asshole, or condescending, and didn’t treat Simon like some weakling that had to be protected. Their relationship developed at a good pace and was really a meeting of equals. It wasn’t the most exciting romance, but it wasn’t bad.

Probably the best part of this book was the mystery aspect. Who kidnapped the kids? Will they be back? Are there more sinister forces lurking in the shadows? At least this part was nicely wrapped up even if there were a lot of other unanswered questions.

The sex scenes were steamy, if a little predictable.

I’m looking forward to the next book in the series. Is this my favorite werewolf book ever? No, but it’s also not bad. I don’t have any major complaints, except maybe that there was a lot of time spent searching for answers. It’s kind of like no one has ever questioned the way things in the supernatural world/community were done, and that just annoyed me on a personal level.

I’m hoping that the coming books don’t also involve lots of time spent searching for answers to questions that arise because there’s a lack of interaction between the species, but something tells me there will be. I mean, it does add tension just by its very nature, but it’s something that could get old quickly.

Also, the end of the story caught me off guard. I wasn’t expecting it to end so soon, with so many unanswered questions, but it was a nice little hook to get me going onto the next book without being a cliffhanger.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Body MagicSoul MagicWild Magic, and the series review.

Review: Cataclysmic Shift (The Aloysius Tales #3) by Tara Lain

A disappointing story for my favorite character of the series.

3 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition, 201 pages. Published September 13th 2017 by Dreamspinner Press (first published July 23rd 2013)

Blurb:

An Aloysius Tale๏ปฟ

Aloysius, the magical black cat and powerful witchโ€™s familiar, isnโ€™t afraid to go into battle to protect his master, but the outcome of the fight turns his feline world upside down. A direct hit of magic steals not only his memories and power, but even the body heโ€™s lived in for several centuries. When he wakes up naked on the floor of a veterinarianโ€™s office, it isnโ€™t as the cat Aloysius, but as the sixteenth-century French gentleman Alain Bellarose. And when Alain sees sexy and enigmatic veterinarian Luke Elliott, he decides heโ€™ll make the best of his time as a human.

Luke is a man with secrets who generally prefers the company of animalsโ€”though the flamboyant boy who washes his face with the side of his hand and tries to lick his own privates might prove an exception.

Meanwhile, Witch Master Killian Barth and his secret weapon, Sammy, struggle without Aloysiusโ€™s power to draw on. Two evil females are circling, and seeing the covenโ€™s weakness, theyโ€™re about to move in for the kill. When Alainโ€™s memories return, heโ€™s faced with the ultimate dilemma: protect his community or stay with the man he loves. 

Likes:

  • Pets.
  • How everything was wrapped up in the end.
  • Good smut.

Dislikes:

  • How unimpressive Alain was.
  • Luke’s past was clichรฉ.
  • Wasn’t hooked.
  • Constant reminders of how handsome and gay the men are.
  • Tone felt sophomoric.
  • Never felt like the stakes were high.
  • Little magic.
  • No new world building.
  • Selective amnesia.
  • Overuse of pet name and dumb swear words.
  • Significant chunk of the story was about Killian.
  • Luke’s timeline doesn’t feel right.
  • Luke’s questionable choices.

Aloysius has been my favorite character for the past two books, and I was really excited for his story. I set the bar higher for this book, which I now regret because overall this book is a bland disappointment.  

As a cat, Aloysius is fierce, cocky, self-assured, and a force to be reckoned with. As a human, he’s a basic twink. Alain’s not a bad guy, but he’s not memorable the way Aloysius is. I think a big part of that disconnect is that Alain’s amnesia took away a lot of his agency. With no memory of who or what he was, no money, and no clues about his past, he attached himself to Luke like a limpet. He was never really given the chance to be anything other than a weird boyfriend who got the occasional overwhelming urge to protect.

I feel like neither Alain nor Luke grew or changed much during the book. Though, to be fair, they weren’t the only focus. This book is the final one in the trilogy, and it needed to wrap everything up. That meant a lot of time spent with Killian and the gang, including a significant amount of time in Killian’s point of view.

Luke wasn’t a bad character either, if you ignore his clichรฉd past and how his timeline in New York working for Nicky and going to vet school doesn’t seem to add up. Pets are a good way to win my affection, and Luke being a vet was nice, as was Alain’s ability to speak with the animals. Like most Tara Lain novels, the smut was good, and there was a lot of it.  

This book didn’t hook me at all. I put it down and forgot about it for a few days. The stakes never felt high, even when Killian was fighting the European witches. Never once was I worried about any of the characters, despite some dicey situations. The tone also didn’t work for me. I can’t explain it well, but it reminded me of high school. Maybe because it felt like I was constantly being reminded of how handsome the men were, like their appearance was the most important thing in the world.

There were a other little things that bugged me, like the overuse of the pet name ‘kitten’ and swear words ‘shitfire’ and ‘she-it’. There was little magic outside the occasional fights, no new world building, and no inclusion of the larger witching community. Not to mention Alain’s selective amnesia. He completely forgot who he was, used old-fashioned words and phrases, but remembered what plastic was.

My final complaint was about Luke’s questionable choices. He lived in fear of being found by Nicky, but didn’t move out of New York. He also didn’t have any sort of protection. I know that guns are illegal in NYC, but what about a taser? Pepper spray? A baseball bat? Hell, even a basic self-defense class. But no. That would have gotten in the way of valiantly standing up to the bad guys and saying he’d die. Literally.

“And what will you do to stop us, human?”

“Die.”

It was a good thing that moment came near the end of the book, because I was so done. I know Luke was a human standing up to powerful witches, but still. Done.

I wish I had more good things to say about this book. And honestly, it wasn’t terrible. I finished it. But it wasn’t anything better than ‘just okay’.  At least the ending wrapped up well and everyone was happy.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Spell Cat (The Aloysius Tales #1), Brush with Catastrophe (The Aloysius Tales #2), Cataclysmic Shift (The Aloysius Tales #3), and the series review.

Review: Brush with Catastrophe (The Aloysius Tales #2) by Tara Lain

The mystery kept me hooked. The rape made me hate the book.

3 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 222 pages. Published April 14th 2017 by Dreamspinner Press (first published September 30th 2012)

Blurb:

Sammy Raphael is a crappy witch, and on top of that, he canโ€™t seem to get a boyfriend. Where other supernaturals can bring down lightning and manifest wealth, Sammy can paint. Granted, the โ€œpropheticโ€ paintings he creates at night always come true, but they never predict anything important. Sammy feels like a total loser with a worthless ability.

One night he paints a gorgeous guy who turns out to be his secret crush, the human Ryder, but Ryderโ€™s changed so much heโ€™s almost unrecognizably beautiful. Then Sammy paints an angel who turns out to be a witch. But is that witch also a devilโ€”a devil who can bring down Sammyโ€™s whole community and everyone he loves? And why the hell does Ryder keep changing? Aloysius, the black cat familiar, always backs a winner. So why is he backing Sammy? 

Likes:

  • Aloysius.
  • The mystery surrounding Ryder and Lucien kept me hooked.
  • Good smut.
  • The occasional points of view from Ryder and Lucian kept me curious.
  • Good to see the changes in the witching community since the last book.
  • Sammy’s powers were interesting.
  • More magic than the last book.

Dislikes:

  • Sexual assault and rape.
  • Sexual assault and rape that weren’t addressed.
  • Main romance didn’t start until halfway through the book.
  • Romance between Ryder and Sammy went from 0 to 60 in a flash.
  • Time jump between books not addressed at first.
  • Ryder constantly turning to sex instead of answering Sammy’s questions.
  • The romance felt like a subplot.
  • I don’t think it would be a good reread.
  • Lots of little inconsistencies.

After my horrible experience rereading Spell Cat, I was a little hesitant to read Brush With Catastrophe. To my surprise, I enjoyed the book. Sammy was relatable and his powers were cool. Best of all, I was hooked by the mystery surrounding Ryder and Lucian. Finding out who they really were and what they were up to was what drove my interest in the book.

The romance is wildly different from what I’m typically used to, and not in a good way. Sammy spends literally half the book with Lucian, with Ryder solidly in the ‘straight and completely untouchable’ category. Right up until that changes. When Lucian’s kicked to the curb and Ryder’s suddenly available, there’s a lot of sex, but little romance. No flirting, no getting to know each other as lovers, and no internal conflict. Just boom, they’re together, and the only problem between them is Ryder’s family issues.

Credit where it’s due. The sex is hot. And there’s a lot of it. So much so that Ryder uses sex as a way to distract Sammy when he starts asking questions. That got annoying fast.

You can’t talk about the sex in this book without bringing up the sexual assault and rape. Like in Spell Cat, the sexual assault goes unpunished. Hell, it’s practically unmentioned after the fact. As is the rape. It’s my least favorite thing about Tara Lain as a writer. This is not the first book where the main character is sexually assaulted and it’s not dealt with. But it’s especially noticeable in this book.

Sammy’s not without his faults, but I liked him. Does he do some stupid things? Sure, but it’s established early on that he has low self-esteem and is desperate for a boyfriend. There are a ton of red flags with Lucian, but I don’t fault Sammy for staying with him. Lucian knows how to turn on the charm. Even Killian fell for the act. 

Once again, Aloysius was awesome. He’s undoubtedly my favorite character. Seeing Blaine and Killian again was fine. I don’t particularly care for them, but with how prominent they are in the coven, it would be hard to leave them out.

I do think a lot of the magical culture has been improved on. There’s more of it, for one. More magic, more time spent discussing issues in the magical world, and more people in the coven. Seeing the changes made to the community since the last book was nice. I would have preferred to know about the one year time gap between this book and the previous one sooner than at the 37% mark, so it would have been easier to put things in perspective.

There are a bunch of little inconsistencies and things that don’t make a lot of sense. Like when Ryder comes back from summer vacation with his big change, and even his eye color is different. Everyone just accepts it like it’s no big deal. You’re telling me that Ryder didn’t even bother wearing colored contacts to at least make his transformation seem normal?

When I’m reading a really good fantasy novel, it’s easy to know which authors spent a lot of time with their world building, and which ones didn’t. This book, and the previous one as well, did not feel like it was fully flashed out in the author’s mind.

Sadly, like the previous book, I don’t think Brush With Catastrophe would make a good reread. The romance alone isn’t strong enough. With the mystery surrounding Ryder and Lucian gone, the book lacks a hook.

I hope the final book in the trilogy will be good. Or at least has no sexual assault. With Aloysius as one of the main characters, I have high hopes.


Be sure to check out the reviews for Spell Cat (The Aloysius Tales #1), Cataclysmic Shift (The Aloysius Tales #3), and the series review.

Review: Spell Cat (The Aloysius Tales #1) by Tara Lain

This didn’t work as a reread.

2 out of 5 stars

Kindle Edition. 201 pages. Published October 31st 2016 by Dreamspinner Press (first published March 19th 2012)

Blurb:

When Killian Barth, history professor, meets Blaine Genneau, quantum physicist, they ignite their own big bang. But sadly, Killian walks away. He doesn’t do physics professors. In fact, he doesn’t do humans, because Killian is the most powerful male witch in 10 generations and, though gay, he’s expected to save his declining race by reproducing.

He can’t even have sex with Blaine, because he’s been taught that sex with humans depletes his power. But if that’s true, why can young human, Jimmy Janx, dissolve spoons with a thought? Somebody’s a lying witch.

With his powerful cat familiar, Aloysius, on his shoulder, Killian brings the lightning against deceit and greed to save Blaine from danger and prove love is the greatest power of them all.

Likes:

  • Aloysius.
  • The non-romantic plot.

Dislikes:

  • Insta-lust.
  • Can’t keep my attention.
  • Killian ended up sounding whiney.
  • Nonconsensual BDSM.
  • Random POV changes.
  • Not much magic.
  • No world building.
  • Killian doesn’t feel like a master witch.
  • No real romance.
  • The characters feel 2 dimensional.

This was a reread for me. I remember liking the book, which was why I was so surprised when I couldn’t get into the story. After finishing the book, I realized that I dislike almost everything in it. The only exceptions are the cat, Aloysius, and the non-romantic plot involving the witch community.

The first thing that really turned me off was the insta-lust. This might have been the most extreme example of it that I’ve ever encountered. Added into the mix is Killian’s lack of experience with love and long romantic relationships. It makes him act like a teenager, including the “No reason for him to exist” moping when his on again/off again relationship with Blaine is off again.

Their relationship was fueled by lust and didn’t go much farther. There was no building of their relationship, none of that feel-good falling in love. They spent very little time together that wasn’t having sex or trying desperately not to have sex. Sure, they confessed their love, but I didn’t see it. It felt more like they decided they were in love because thatโ€™s what the plot needed.

Killian’s attraction to Blaine was based a lot on the fact that Blaine liked him without knowing that Killian was the Witch Master. Basically, Blaine was the first person to be nice to him without an ulterior motive. That’s not the building blocks of love. It just highlighted how sheltered Killian was.

Killian doesn’t act like a Witch Master, or much of a witch at all. The magic in this book is basically just a plot device, and a boring one at that. There’s no world building, no explanation of why witches exist, and no exploration of the witching community at large.

I have liked a lot of Tara Lain’s books in the past, but there is a trend in some of her books that I just hate โ€“ sexual assault that goes unpunished. Off the top of my head, I can think of two other examples besides this book that include sexual assault where the character doesn’t report the matter. Killian basically does the same thing, so instead of putting that down to his character, I put that on Lain. Killian had the power and position to punish his attacker, who tuned a consenting sexual encounter into a nonconsensual one involving BDSM. It’s the lack of punishment that bothers me so much, and the fact that it feels like a pattern in Lain’s writing.

My final complaint is how two-dimensional the characters are. Power hungry women, faux Russian mobsters, creeps, and college students. Looking back on the book, it doesn’t feel like any of the characters had depth. The worst was Jimmy, not because he was 2D but because he didnโ€™t sound like a college student majoring in physics. Not when he says things like “Jeez” and “I can’t believe you still loved me when you thought I might be the death of everything you hold dear.”

I wanted to like this book. I did before. But I need the romance to be more important than the lust. Because I knew what would happen with the plot, the curiosity that fueled my interest was gone. I’m going to assume that the question of ‘how will this relationship work’ was what made me like the book the first time. I hope the next book in the series will be better, but my excitement for it has dulled significantly.


Be sure to check out the reviews forย Brush with Catastrophe (The Aloysius Tales #2), Cataclysmic Shift (The Aloysius Tales #3), and theย series review.